(
课件网) 读后续写微技能7 环境描写 Learning objectives： 1 master the words 2. practise more 在高中英语读后续写中，环境描写常用的词汇和句型可以帮助学生更好地描绘场景，增强故事的情感表达和生动性。 自然环境： meadow (草地), forest (森林), mountain (山脉), river (河流), lake (湖泊), ocean (海洋), cliff (悬崖), cave (洞穴), waterfall (瀑布), desert (沙漠), jungle (丛林) 天气： sunny (晴朗的), cloudy (多云的), rainy (下雨的), stormy (暴风雨的), windy (有风的), snowy (下雪的), foggy (有雾的) 常用词汇： 常用词汇： 时间： dawn (黎明), sunrise (日出), daytime (白天), sunset (日落), dusk (黄昏), night (夜晚) 光线： sunlight (阳光), moonlight (月光), shadow (阴影), ray (光线), gleam (闪光), glow (微光), shimmer (闪烁) 动词&形容词 温度： warm (温暖的), hot (热的), cold (冷的), cool (凉爽的), freezing (冰冻的), chill (寒冷的) 气氛： serene (宁静的), tranquil (平静的), peaceful (和平的), calm (安静的), quiet (安静的), noisy (嘈杂的), bustling (繁忙的), lively (活泼的), vibrant (充满生机的), chaotic (混乱的) 在写作时，注意以下几点： 1.使用丰富的形容词和副词：形容词和副词可以描绘环境的特点，如美丽、宁静、阴森等。 The peaceful lake was surrounded by lush green trees, creating a calm atmosphere. 这个宁静的湖被郁郁葱葱的绿色树木包围着，营造出一种平静的气氛。 2. 利用感官描写：通过描述视觉、听觉、嗅觉、触觉和味觉来让读者身临其境。 A gentle breeze rustled the leaves, creating a soothing melody that complemented the sweet fragrance of blooming flowers. 一阵微风吹拂着树叶，创造出一种舒缓的旋律，增添了盛开的花朵的芬芳。 3.使用比喻和拟人 通过将非人类事物比作人类或赋予其人类特征，增强描写的生动性和形象性。 The towering mountains stood like soldiers on duty , guarding the valley below. 高耸的山像哨兵一样矗立，守卫着下面的山谷。 4.注意氛围的营造： 通过描述光线、温度、天气等元素，营造相应的氛围。 The dim moonlight cast horrible shadows on the abandoned house, adding to the sense of mystery. 昏暗的月光在废弃的房子上投下了可怕的阴影，增加了一种神秘感。 5.结合情节发展和人物情感 环境描写应与故事情节和人物情感相结合，以增强情感表达和故事连贯性。 As the storm raged outside, Mary's heart sank with each flash of lightning, mirroring her own inner restlessness. 当暴风雨在外面肆虐时，玛丽的心随着每一道闪电而沉下去，反映了她自己内心的混乱。 Practice :根据提示填空 1. "The lush green forest stretched as far as the eye could see, filled with life." 郁郁葱葱的森林一望无际，生机勃勃。 2. "A gentle breeze blew down on the cheeks of the villagers, bringing with it the promise of a cool evening." 一阵轻柔的微风吹拂着村民的脸颊，带来了一个凉爽夜晚的承诺。 3. "The scorching sun beat down on the barren landscape, making the air feel thick and heavy." 炎热的太阳炙烤着贫瘠的景象，使空气显得浓重而闷热。 The lush green forest The lush green forest filled with life filled with life A gentle breeze A gentle breeze feel thick and heavy feel thick and heavy 4. "The setting sun cast long shadows across the courtyard, creating an complicated pattern of ... ...
