专题27读后续写之写出画面感（动作刻画） 读后续写类似于写小说，要想让人物丰满起来，让情节往前发展，动作的描写是其中灵魂。动作推动情节发展。读后续写动作描写的关键在于：要将结果性的动作变得过程化，可视化，这样才会让文章更有可读性，而不至于枯燥无味。读后续写动作描写有几个高分公式，学会它们，让我们的续写画面感满满。 目录 1.动作描写公式 2.常见动作高分表达 I.动作描写公式 1.动作链： Sb + did A , did B and did C .（动作链的创建能够营造强烈的画面感，吸引读者阅读兴趣） 1）She woke up , slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the door . 她醒来，从床上滑下来，踮着脚走到门口。 2) I woke up early , finished my breakfast quickly and rushed out of the door in my eagerness to get to know my new school. 我早早起床，快速吃完早饭，冲出门迫切地想去看看我的新学校。 3）He lost his balance , staggered back against the rail and fell over . 他失去了平衡，往后趔趄撞在栏杆上，然后摔倒了。 4）Hearing the scream, he rushed to the river, took off clothes and jumped into the river without hesitation/delay/a second thought. 听到尖叫声，他冲到河边，脱下衣服，毫不犹豫地跳到河里。 5）He struggled and screamed for help, but all in vain. 他挣扎着，尖叫着呼救，但都是徒劳。 6）She grabbed the fly , threw a few jets of silk around it ,and rolled it over, wrapping it so that it couldn’t move. 她擒住苍蝇，往它身上缠了几道丝线，丝线越缠越密，直到苍蝇一动也不动。 7）He glanced at Fern,then crept cautiously toward the goose, keeping close to the wall. 它瞥了一眼费恩，然后紧贴墙壁，谨慎地爬向大鹅。 8）“You don’t suppose that spider....” began Mr. Zuckerman--but he shook his head and didn’t finish the sentence. “你不会认为那只蜘蛛......”咋克曼先生说道，但是他又摇摇头没有再说下去。 9）She sank into a chair and looked pale and frightened. 她瘫坐在椅子上，脸色看起来仓白又惊恐。 10)He took off his work clothes and put on his best suit; then he got into the car and drove to the minister’s house. 他脱下工作服，换上他最好的西装，然后开车去牧师家。 2.主语＋谓语 + with复合结构． 1） When Kate saw it , she hugged it tightly with tears filling her eyes. 当 Kate 看到它时，她紧紧地拥抱着它，双眸满是泪水。 2) We all pretty much slept with one eye open . 我们几乎都不敢睡太熟。 3)He leaned against the kitchen counter ,glaring at me,with his arms folded across his chest , . 他靠在厨房的操作台上，双臂交叉在胸前，怒视着我。 3.主语+谓语+非谓语动词 / 非谓语动词+主语+谓语 1)They ran in bare feet , laughing and teasing . 他们光着脚跑着，笑着闹着。 2)Moved to tears, she could hardly utter a single word. 她被感动地流泪了，一句话也说不出来。 3)He laid his fishing pole down and dragged his feet , moving toward me at a snail’s pace . 他放下钓鱼竿，像蜗牛一样磨磨蹭蹭地向我走来。 4.主语＋谓语+独立主格 1） She felt a lump in her throat as she watched the touching scene unfold before her eyes , her heart overflowing with gratitude . 她看着眼前感人的场景，哽咽了，心中充满了感激。 2）He scratched his head nervously , his body language betraying his discomfort and embarrassment . 他紧张地挠头，身体语言透露出他的不适和尴尬。 3 ... ...
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