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课件网) 求助信“金纲” 高考英语作文之“任务写作” 黄金开头句式： ①I'm writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor. 我写信是想问您能否帮助我。 ②I'm sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help. 很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。 ③I have some difficulty in doing ...which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help. 我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。 (2)吸引阅卷人篇中句 ④I can't concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot. 这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。 ⑤Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help. 面对如此多的问题，我不得不向您求助。 (3)吸引阅卷人结尾句 ⑥I would be very grateful if you could help me .../I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and ... 如果您能帮助我……我会非常感激。 ⑦I'd appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration/account. 如果您能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。 金纲七：题型百变 Ⅱ.下面的考生作文中共有10处语言错误，请改正 假定你是李华，最近与好朋友Lucy吵架了，现在给外教Melinda写一封邮件请求帮助。邮件内容包含： 1．吵架的原因； 2．吵架后的心情； 3．请求Melinda给出解决办法。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Melinda， The reason why I am writting to you is because I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now. The quarrel was occurred when we were discussing whether we should go shopping at last weekend. Because the coming examination, she insisted on studying at school while I opposed strongly. After the incident, we have not chatted any more, caused me great depression. I am sincere sorry to see things going like this and I have been felt frustrated ever since. I really don't want to lose this friend. Could you please offer me some effective and practical advices Looking forward to you reply. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 答案： 第一句：writting→writing; because→that 第二句：去掉was; 去掉at 第三句：Because后加of 第四句：caused→causing 第五句：sincere→sincerely; felt→feeling 第七句：advices→advice 第八句：you→your
