(
课件网) 通知“金纲” 高考英语作文之“任务写作” (2018·全国卷Ⅱ)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括： 1．短片内容：学校的发展； 2．放映时间、地点； 3．欢迎对短片提出意见。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【审题谋篇】 体裁 通知 人称 第三人称为主 时态 一般现在时为主 要点 1.短片内容；2.放映时间、地点；3.欢迎对短片提出意见 【提纲要点】 1.第一段———点题：你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片 ①Rccently, an outstanding short film will_be_shown in our school. Welcome to join_us_and_enjoy_it! 2．第二段———主体段落展开：短片内容；放映时间、地点；欢迎对短片提出意见。 ②短片内容：学校的发展 The movie is a documentary about the_development_of_our_school. ③放映时间、地点 It will_be_shown in the library on June 9th. ④欢迎参加会后讨论并对短片提出意见 Every one of you is be_welcome_to take part in the discussion held afterwards and give your comments. ⑤我们期待你的评论和反馈。 We are expecting_and_encouraging your comments and feedback. 3．第三段———表达期望 ⑥I have the confidence that you will have_a_great_time then. 1.句②通过增加定语从句来拓展要点 The name of the movie is Growing Together, which is a documentary about the development of our beloved school. 2．句③通过增加具体时间和地点拓展要点 It will be shown on the fourth floor of the school library from 2：00 to 4：00 in the afternoon on June 9th. 3．句④和句⑤用非谓语动词作状语合并为一句，实现句式升级 Every one of you is welcome to take part in the discussion held afterward s, expected and encouraged to give your comments and feedback. 【润色升级】
