(
课件网) It’s so windy outside. I am so afraid. What if everyone is blown away It’s so windy outside. I am so afraid. What if everyone is blown away Only I am left on the ground. How shameful! 读后续写 读后续写的具体要求 提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语，进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。 注意 一、所续写短文的词数应为150左右（词数少于130的， 从总分中减去2分，超过不扣分）；两段--平均分配 二、至少一个以上细节描写 三、故事情节的曲折性 四 符合逻辑 五 续写部分与整体文本故事发展的衔接，所给首句与下一句的衔接，还有第一段段尾与第二段段首的衔接 步骤？ Read for information Step 1 1 5w+H who when where why what how (feelings) main idea of the story 2 organization In what order is the material developed 3 language and tone，sentence pattern句子结构 vivid生动,specific具体,concise简明,humorous, ironic讽刺 → immitate 模仿 Read Read for 5W1H main idea On weekend in July, Jane was lost in the forest because she had quarreled with Tom. who 人物（角色） when 时间 where 地点 what 事件 why 原因 how 怎么 Jane, Tom one weekend in July in the forest Jane was lost they quarreled angry, afraid, regrettable One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no m ... ...
