2024届江苏省苏锡常镇高三下学期二模读后续写讲义

2023 ~ 2024年度苏锡常镇二模读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 She was the prettiest puppy we had ever seen, and the whole family immediately fell in love with her. We named her Onyx because of her thick, shiny black coat. She spent her first vacation with us when she was only ten weeks old and had her first bath and swim in the St. Lawrence River. We had no clue that this amazing little ball of fur would end up being our hero. As she grew older, Onyx became more and more involved in our family activities. On hot summer days, Onyx enjoyed floating on the river with us in her own rubber tube (橡皮圈). Amazingly standing on the top of the tube, she smiled while showing off her perfect balance. Resting her front legs and paws over the edge of the rubber tube, she kept her eyes shut as she floated until she'd had enough of the warm sun on her black coat. One day, our eighteen-year-old daughter, Margie, announced she was going to swim across the bay. No one in the family was free to go swimming with her. The unwritten rule, regardless of swimming ability, was to have a companion in the water with you, especially when swimming the width of the bay. I was not a good swimmer, so I said to Margie, “Take Onyx with you.” Having heard her name, Onyx woke up from a nap and was ready for action. Margie signed the dog to follow her. Onyx ran to the water next to her. They entered the freezing river together and swam side by side across the bay. I watched from the bank as they reached the sandbar (沙洲) on the far shore. They rested a few minutes before diving into the water for the return trip. I felt uneasy for some reason and continued to watch the pair swim side by side. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph1 Suddenly I heard Margie calling out, “I have a cram (痉挛) in the leg!” _____ Paragraph2 Seeing the pair approaching the riverbank, I breathed a sigh of relief. _____ 1. Summarize the passage. My family and I fell in love with a dog at the first sight and named her Onyx because of her thick, shiny black coat. In our daily life, she often _____ with us and she _____ it. One day, our daughter, Margie, expressed that she would like to swim _____ the bay. However, all of us were occupied and no one could accompany her. We had no choice but to take Onyx with her. At first, they swam _____ and reached the sandbar. After a short rest, they started to come back. Suddenly, Margie called for help. 2. Important words and phrases in the passage. 1. 我们见过的最可爱的小狗 2. 不知道 3. 这个小毛球最后将成为我们的英雄 4. 和我们漂浮在水面上 5. 炫耀她完美的平衡 6. 把她的腿和爪子放在边缘休息 7. 家中没人有空 8. 不成文的规定 9. 与游泳能力无关 10. 在水中有一个同伴 11. 从小睡中醒来 12. 准备好行动 13. 让狗跟着她 14. 并排游过了海湾 15. 潜入水中 16. 由于某种原因感到不安 3. 情节语言梳理 动作链 Para1. 听到Margie呼救 → Margie在水中挣扎 → 我的心理（紧张、不安）→ Onyx去救Margie（救的过程中 ... ...