24年深圳二模写作讲义庆祝班级活动李华你怎么看 庆祝班级活动，李华，你怎么看？ 生活不是缺少美，而是缺少发现美的眼睛。学习生活也是如此，每一件美好的事情都值得庆祝，更何况是班上获得了校英语戏剧节一等奖呢？更是可喜可贺！ 那当庆祝活动遇上民意调查，更有意思的应用文写作如约而至！ PART 1 Text Analysis and Appreciation 【写作任务分析】 该写作任务围绕庆祝班级成就和民意调查展开，创新地融合图表作文、感谢信、建议信和观点看法类写作的特点，深化基础性，增强综合性、应用性和创新性，考查学生正确表达感谢之情、分析调查结果并提出个人建议和看法的能力。该写作任务涉及民意调查，贴近学生学习生活，且体现民主和谐自由平等的社会主义核心价值观，注重培养学生人际交往的能力和组织协调能力。同时也考量学生在实际情境中解决问题的能力，具有一定的挑战性和实用性。 【分析题目信息】 PART 2 Outline and Language Support 【列提纲与语块】 PART 3 Sample Writing and Assessment 【官方范文】 参考范文一 Dear James, I hope this email finds you well. We are so thankful for your enthusiasm in celebrating our class winning the first prize at the English Drama Festival. Your support means a lot to us! Based on the survey I conducted, 88% of us are enthusiastic about a weekend outing, while 59% favour an English movie night, followed by 32% who prefer a food party. My preference is in line with the majority, so I suggest a hiking trip along the nearby greenway, which has lively plants and stunning views. Such an outing is perfect for us to take a break from study routines, strengthen friendship and make our success more memorable. Thanks again for your thoughtful gesture. Looking forward to our exciting celebration! (124词) Yours, Li Hua 参考范文二 Dear James, Thank you for trusting me to survey our classmates’ preferred activities for celebrating our success at the English Drama Festival. Here are the results and my personal opinion. From the survey, outings on weekends and English movie nights are favored by 88% and 59% of us respectively, with 32% keen on sharing food and drinks. To meet the varied interests, I would recommend we organize an outdoor gathering at the city park, where we can bring along various foods and drinks to share. I believe this plan would ideally satisfy those seeking an adventure and those who wish to relax and enjoy good company. Thank you once again for your support and for considering my suggestion! (116词) Yours, Li Hua 【下水作文】 Dear James, I hope this letter finds you well. Representing our class, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement and enlightment, without which we would not have ranked first in the Drama Competition. With regard to celebration activities, outing at weekends is among the top recommendations. Considering the balmy weather and soothing air in April, it is no wonder that 88% of our participants expressed their preference for nature. Watching English movies is another nice alternative, as about half of our students would like to immerse themselves in a virtual fancy world. Roughly one third of our respondents prefer to share f ... ...
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