2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之初中成长与回顾类（含范文）

2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之初中成长与回顾类 1．（2024·海南海口·一模）经过初中三年的学习和生活，你一定在各方面都有所成长，你的成长离不开身边人的帮助，他/她可能是你的父母、老师、同学或者你的好朋友，请以“The person who has helped me a lot”为题写一篇短文，在英语课堂上分享。 要点：1. Who has helped you a lot 2. How did he/she help you 3. What do you want to say to him/her 注意：1. 要点齐全，适当拓展； 2. 行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4. 100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 The person who has helped me a lot After three years’ study and life in middle school, I think I have become a better teenager. And the person who has helped me a lot is _____ 【范文】 The person who has helped me a lot After three years’ study and life in middle school, I think I have become a better teenager. And the person who has helped me a lot is my English teacher. She’s very kind and hardworking. She’s so helpful that she’s ready to help almost every student in her class. Two years ago, I used to be afraid to speak English. But she tried her best to solve my problem. Thanks to her help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can speak in public and don’t feel nervous. She teaches me not only to learn but also to be a good person. I want to say to her, “Thank you, teacher. I hope you will always be healthy and happy.” 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时，一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍谁帮了你很多； 第二步，具体介绍他/她是如何帮助你的； 第三步，表达想对他/她说的话。 [亮点词汇] ①be ready to do sth 乐意做某事 ②be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事 ③try her best to do sth 尽她最大的努力做某事 ④made great progress 取得巨大的进步 [高分句型] ①She teaches me not only to learn but also to be a good person.（not only...but also...） ②I hope you will always be healthy and happy.（省略that的宾语从句） 2．（2024·陕西榆林·二模）转眼间，初中三年的光阴就要画上句号了。在这期间，你肯定有过彷徨、难过、遇到困难的时候，你还记得是谁向你伸出来了援助之手吗？在即将毕业之际，请你根据以下提示，把这段经历描述出来，以表达你的感恩之心吧！ 提示： 1. What difficulties (problems) did you meet and how did you feel 2. How did she/he help you 3. How did the situation become better 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） How time flies! It has been more than two years since I went to middle school. _____ 【范文】 How time flies! It has been more than two years since I went to middle school. Two years ago when I began to learn English, I found that it was hard for me to remember all the new words and understand the listening exercises. I didn’t know what to do. My teacher advised me to try to learn at least ten new words every day and listen to the tape and radio programs. So I ... ...