一 读后续写原题目呈现： I was always afraid of water.This fear could not be explained,but I knew that the moment I stepped near any body of water,my legs would turn to jelly(果冻).I would imagine myself drowning in the water and thrashing around (乱扑腾)helplessly.That was why I had never gone into a swimming pool until swimming became a school requirement.My school wanted all pupils to pass a swimming test,and if they could not,then they would have to attend weekly swimming lessons in school,which made me tremble. Thus,my parents signed me up for swimming lessons at the pool near my house.With great unwillingness,I attended those weekly lessons,and each one was great suffering for me.I was naturally clumsy,and my fear of water did not help at all.Every lesson,I would be spending my time thrashing about in the water,while my classmates would be swimming countless laps effortlessly and even turning over like dolphins in the water.How was I going to pass the test at this rate In my swimming class,there was an exceptionally athletic girl.Tall and muscular,her name was Kathy.She was the best swimmer in our class and always looked at me with disdain(鄙视), especially when I thrashed about hopelessly in the water. Once,after a particularly long and hard swimming lesson,I spotted Kathy swimming gracefully in the pool. Gathering my courage,I asked gently,"Kathy,can you teach me to swim "She stared at me coldly.It was as if I stood at the edge of an endless ocean of inadequacy,my fears appearing like dark storm clouds threatening to drown me. Yet,in that moment,a glimmer of hope flashed within me,a desperate longing for guidance and acceptance.Would Kathy's icy exterior(外表)melt under the warmth of empathy,or would I remain forever thrashing in the sea of my own fears 二中文意思： 我一直害怕水。这种恐惧无法解释，但我知道，只要我走近任何水域，我的腿就会软得像果冻一样。我会想象自己在水中溺水，并无助地挣扎。这就是为什么我从未进过游泳池，直到游泳成为学校的必修课程。我的学校希望所有学生都能通过游泳测试，如果他们不能，就必须在学校参加每周一次的游泳课程，这让我颤抖。 因此，我的父母为我报了一个靠近家的游泳课程。我非常不情愿地参加了那些每周一次的课程，每一次对我来说都是巨大的痛苦。我天生笨拙，我的水性更是一点帮助也没有。每一节课，我都会在水中挣扎，而我的同学们却能轻松地游过无数圈，甚至在水中像海豚一样翻转。按这个速度，我要怎么通过测试呢？在我的游泳课上，有一个特别健壮的女孩。高高的，肌肉发达，她叫凯西。她是我们班最好的游泳者，总是鄙视地看着我，在水里绝望地挣扎 有一次，在一节特别长而艰难的游泳课后，我看到凯西在池中优雅地游泳。鼓起勇气，我温柔地问：“凯西，你能教我游泳吗？”她冷冷地盯着我。就像我站在一个无尽的无能为力之海的边缘，我的恐惧就像黑暗的暴风云威胁要淹没我。 然而，在那一刻，我内心闪过一丝希望，对指导和接受的渴望。凯西的冰冷外表会在同情的温暖下融化，还是我将永远在自己恐惧的海洋中挣扎？ 第一段：令我惊讶的是，她沉默片刻后点了点头。 第二段：“恭喜！”凯西得知我通过了游泳测试时说道。 三 分析故事： 时间：故事发生在主角年幼时期到她成为青少年的阶段，具体时间未明确 ... ...
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