(
课件网) 2024届高考续写冲刺—友善助人篇情节建构 2024届高三英语考前讲座 读 后 续 写 语篇演练 2024南京盐城二模读后续写———特别的生日派对 文本：When we are little kids, birthday parties are momentous occasions. They are our time to shine, and we love everything about them: the balloons, the games, the cake, the gifts, and so on. After reading cool stories about police officers solving mysteries, Allen Miller thought the police were awesome, hoping to become one of them! So, when he had to choose a theme for his seventh birthday party—he went with his favorite: the police! And all he wanted for his birthday party was a model police car. He excitedly invited some of his friends and anxiously awaited the day. Unfortunately, none of them could make it to the party due to various reasons. Allen’s mom Rachel wrestled with the challenging decision: should she cancel the party and save Allen the embarrassment of an empty party room He had been looking forward to the party and talking about it daily, so it would break his heart to cancel it. Officer Frank Smith, who had already planned with Rachel and agreed to show up at the party, heard from Rachel that it might be canceled due to low attendance. That’s when he decided to save the day—he is a police officer after all! His duty is to serve and protect, and he decided to protect Allen from having a bad day, and serve him the most amazing seventh birthday party! Officer Smith got the whole local police to join in. “We like to be involved in our community. It’s not just about enforcing (执行) the law. We like to be there in the good times as well,” he explained to Rachel. On the day of Allen’s party, Officer Smith picked up Rachel and Allen in his police car. The boy didn’t know where they were going, but was excited. They stopped at Town Hall, and officer Smith led them into the meeting room where a group of policemen were waiting to wish Allen a happy birthday. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右: 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 There, a party was waiting for him. _____ _____ After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. _____ _____ 原文大意 这篇短文讲述了一个小男孩Allen Miller对警察主题的生日派对的期望，以及他所面临的一个问题———邀请的朋友们都不能来参加他的生日派对。Allen的妈妈，Rachel，和一个叫Frank Smith警官计划了一个特殊的生日派对，但因为没有朋友能来，她在考虑是否取消派对。知道这一情况后，Smith警官决定采取行动，让整个当地警察局的警察加入，为Allen举办一个难忘的生日派对。最终，Allen被带到市政厅的会议室，那里有一群警察等着为他庆祝生日。 第一段情节：Allen所见+Allen感受到的惊喜和快乐+切(吃)蛋糕 第二段情节：模型警车+Allen收到心仪礼物时的惊喜+主题升华 读写学案 要点描述一：Allen进入Town Hall所见1. Allen的新朋友们———那些警察们的脸上洋溢着喜悦，他们热情地欢迎他。The faces of Allen’s new friends, the policemen, _____ as they welcomed him.（They surrounded Allen and a chorus of shouts broke out,“welcome to your party) 2.欢 ... ...
