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课件网) Micro-skills in Continuation Writing Emotion Description Teaching Aims After the lesson, you are able to: 1) Have a better understanding of the emotion description 2) Apply the strategies to describe emotion correctly 3) Judge, appreciate and create the emotion expressions in writing by self-study, group discussion and group work 读 后 续 写 高 考 真 题 题 号 问题 原 因 办 法 体裁 主题思想 侧重点 2022新高考Ⅰ 残疾的David因害怕别人嘲笑不敢参与越野赛 老师让他自己选择参加还是不参加 特教老师的劝说 记叙文 战胜自卑 动作描写 情感描写 2021新高考Ⅰ 双胞胎做早餐把厨房弄得一团糟 给母亲惊喜, 庆祝母亲节 … their father appeared 父亲助攻 记叙文 母亲节惊喜 动作描写 情感描写 2020新高考Ⅰ Bernard如何赚钱帮助养家 经济衰退 John had an idea: 做爆米花卖钱 记叙文 助人献爱心 动作描写 情感描写 2020浙江高考 野熊来到营地前 熊闻到面包大蒜气味 tried known actions: ... 辣椒水 直升飞机 记叙文 险境求生 动作描写 情感描写 2017浙江高考 骑行遇狼 未知 向路过轿车求助 记叙文 险境求生 情感描写 动作描写 nervous？ anxious？ excited calm hopeless confused Step1: Lead-in describe the picture! worried relaxed？ I am excited. She feels calm. He is confused. We are nervous or relaxed. How to make the emotion description more vivid？ Discuss in your group to summarise the sentence patterns and translate the sentences according to the patterns. After finishing them ,write your group’s answers on the blackboard. Group Task (Summarize) Task (Translate) Group 1 Sentence pattern 1 (1) & (2) Group 2 Sentence pattern 2 (3) & (4) Group 3 Sentence pattern 3 (5) & (6) Comment Group 2 Group 3 Group 1 Step 2 Summarise and Translate Sentence pattern 1: adj 1 and adj 2, 主+谓， diong…/独立主格结构 (1). Desperate and exhausted, Jane knelt down, with tears rolling down her cheeks. (2). Wild with joy, Jane quickened pace and rushed to the helicopter, knowing that she would be rescued eventually. Sentence pattern 2： (doing…), so + adj / adv +部分倒装 + that…, (doing…) (3). Spotting this, so frightened was the deer that she trembled all over like a leaf. (4). So thrilled was Jack that he stepped onto the stage, giving his wife a warm hug. Sentence pattern 3: (doing…), sb. felt a sense/wave of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb, (doing/which…) (5). Hearing his words on the phone, I felt a wave of guilt sweeping over me and hung my head shamefully, with my face burning. (6). Seeing his daughter safe and sound, he felt a great sense of relief welling up in his heart and surging through him, bursting into tears. 万能句式（四） 7. A surge of excitement seized her. 8. A smile of satisfaction took hold of him. 9. A strong sense of horror overwhelmed him. 她兴奋得不能自已。 他满意地微笑。 他惊恐万分。 Sentence pattern 4: 量词 + 表情感状态的名词 + 动词 + sb 常用量词：a burst/mixture/wave / flood / surge / sense of… 常用动词：seize/grasp/take hold of, tear sb into pieces/crawl/creep爬，swallow吞噬，well up涌出，surge 涌动 ... ...
