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课件网) Unit 7 Oxford English Module 4 Discovery Period 5 Writing The unknown world Taste the story 1 When and where did the story take place Who was in the story What happened in the story At the beginning: In the middle: In the end: A story When&Where(setting): Who(characters): What (plots) the beginning: the middle: the ending: From a midnight to the next two mornings; On an unknown planet Tina and Tom and their parents; two astronauts woke up; saw; heard mentioned; explore; heard; hid; saw; frightened; met two alients; ran away told; refuse to believe; flew to school; Earth In time order (时间顺序) 1. Structure （结构） The simple past tense 2. Sensory details(感官细节) Tina heard Two aliens: tall with a round head and a silver body; a damaged spaceship a yellow light dived towards the ground; a red light Sensory details Tina saw Tina felt a loud/terrible noise; some voices speaking a strange language curious(好奇的); frightened; ran away in fear 3. dialogues(对话) Without dialogue With dialogue Add information She said she was sure something landed in the forest near the hills as she heard a loud noise last night. ... But Dad said since no one else saw these aliens, he refused to believe her. “I'm sure something landed in the forest near the hills as I heard a loud noise last night,” She said. ... But Dad said, “Since no one else saw these aliens, I refuse to believe you. Now go to school. ” Keep the action moving She asked her brother to explore after school. She said, “Let's explore after school.” Tips: 人物间的对话可让叙述更富真实感和亲切感。 Think about a new story 2 Captain Troy Liz and Gus Mother ship bird-like people with wings Who was in the story Where did the story take place What would the bird-like people want to do What would the astronauts repond How would they communicate with each other Discussion 1.Put the events in correct order No one knew what to do. She started to sing as she wanted to show the people of Bird World that she was friendly. Then Liz had a good idea. Because the people of Bird World liked her song, they started to sing too. Li and Gus finally reached the landing site and saw Captain Troy. Suddenly, they heard a noise and saw some bird-like people. So the people from the Earth and Bird World became friends. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 Is it a good story now Li and Gus finally reached the landing site and saw Captain Troy.Suddenly, they heard a noise and saw some bird-like people. No one knew what to do.Then Liz had a good idea.She started to sing as she wanted to show the people of Bird World that she was friendly. Because the people of Bird World liked her song, they started to sing too. So the people from the Earth and Bird World became friends. 2. Think about the sensory details 1） What did they hear 2）What did Captain Troy see 3）How did they probably feel They heard a strange sound. /They heard some birds twittering(鸟啾啾叫). He saw some bird-like peopl ... ...
