家庭生活 第一部分 关联教材 （人教新目标） 【教材话题衔接】 教 材 话 题 写作角度 7 下 Unit 8 Is there a post office near here The neighborhood Ask for and give directions on the street 8 上 Unit 4 What’s the best movie theater Your town Discuss preferences; Make comparisons 8 上 Unit 7 Will people have robots Life in the future Make predictions 8 下 Unit 10 I’ve had this bike for three years. Living environment Talk about things around possessions you and 【教材句式回顾】 1.It is very quiet and I enjoy reading there. 它非常安静,我喜欢在那里读书。(7 下教材 P47) 2. Talent shows are getting more and more popular. 才艺表演变得越来越受欢迎。(8 上教材P29) 3. It’s always interesting to watch other people show their talents. 观看其他人展示他们的才艺 总是很有趣的。(8 上教材 P29) 【文化表达积累】 1.East, west, home is best. 金窝银窝,不如自己的草窝。 2. Home is the place where, when you have to go there, it has to take you in. 无论何时何地,家永远是向游子敞开大门的地方。 3. He is the happiest, be he king or peasant, who finds peace in his home. 无论是国王还是农夫,家庭和睦就是幸福。 4.If a family is in harmony, everything will be successful. 家和万事兴。 5.It is better to see once than hear a hundred times. 百闻不如一见。 第二部分 策略解析 (2021·温州中考) 在中国传统文化中,“家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂,才是完整的家,温暖而有力量。 请你结合下图, 以“Home”为题, 写一篇约 110 词的英语短文,让外国朋友了解中国文化中的 “家”。 【写作解析】 第一步：审题 1.定人称:第一人称为主 2.定时态:一般现在时 3.定要点:(1)家的含义:Home means a lot to everyone. (2)对家的理解:It’s a place full of love. It’s a place full of strength. (3)我的愿望:I hope everyone has a happy home. 4.定思路:文章首先要点明主题, 即“家”有很多含义;接着表达自己对“家”的理解,如“家”是 一个充满爱的港湾,“家”是给你力量的地方,“家”是你成长的摇篮等;最后可表达祝愿,如希望 人人都有一个幸福的家等。 第二步：谋篇 框架 要点 升格/扩写 开头 开篇点题 家的含义 Home has many meanings to everyone. 丰 富 表 达 :Home means a lot to everyone. _____ 主体 介绍“家” 家最温暖 Home is the warmest place. 扩 写 原 因 : Home is the warmest place. 家里有爱 Home is a place full of love. 扩 写 具 体 事 例 :Home is a place full of love. _____ 家是力量 Home is a place full of strength. 扩 写 感 想 : Home is a place full of strength. _____ 结尾 总结全文 发出祝愿 I hope everyone has a happy home. 用谚语升格: I hope everyone has a happy home. 第三步：成篇 Home Home means a lot to everyone. No matter where we go, home is always waiting for us. When our family members come back home for reunion, we sit around the table, sharing our achievements and happiness. Home is the warmest place. Home is a place full of love. Love can be expressed by gifts, family dinners and phone calls. However, none is better than going back home and spending time with our families. Home is also a place full of strength. Whenever we have difficulties, we can return home. Thanks to the encouragement and help from our families, we can rebuild our belief and ... ...
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