(
课件网) B4 U2 Integrated skills ①Thinking (审题） ②Outlining（列提纲,写要点） ③Expanding（扩词成句） ④Linking（连句成篇） ⑤Polishing（润色定稿） How to Write a composition 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你写信问你最喜欢的音乐家是谁。请你用英文回复邮件，内容包括： 1.音乐家的简介； 2.喜欢他/她的原因； 3.他/她的影响。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Thinking (审题） Step 1 Para.1 开头 Para.2 正文 Para.3 结尾 Outlining （列出提纲，写要点） Step 2 要点二 要点一 写作背景+写作目的 简介和贡献 影响 我最欣赏的音乐家是贝多芬。知道你想了解他，我迫不及待地写信向你详细介绍他。 Para 1（Beginning） Expanding (扩词成句） Step 3 The musician who I admire most is Beethoven. Knowing that you want to learn about him, I’m eagerly writing to introduce him to you in detail. 1.贝多芬出生于一个音乐世家，从小就展现出独特的才华。 Beethoven, born into a family of musicians, displayed unique talent from a young age. Para2：简介及贡献 Expanding (扩词成句） Step 3 2.然而，他的生活发生了急剧的转折，因为他开始失去听力。 However, his life took a sharp turn because he started to lose his losing. 3.尽管面临如此巨大的挑战，他从未放弃希望。 In spite of facing such a big challenge, he never abandoned his hope. Para2：简介及贡献 Expanding (扩词成句） Step 3 4.正是他尽了最大努力，继续过着音乐的生活，为世界呈现了伟大的作品。 It was he who tried his best to continue living a life of music, presenting the world with great works. Para2：简介及贡献 Expanding (扩词成句） Step 3 Para. 3 影响 Expanding (扩词成句） Step 3 我钦佩他，是因为他的努力和毅力激励我不畏艰难去追求梦想，对我的学习和生活都产生了巨大的影响。 I admire him because his efforts and perseverance inspire me to pursue my dreams despite various challenges, making a big difference to my study and life. 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你写信问你最喜欢的音乐家是谁。请你用英文回复邮件，内容包括： 1.音乐家的简介； 2.喜欢他/她的原因； 3.他/她的影响。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Thinking (审题） Step 1 Dear Peter, Beethoven, born into a family of musicians, displayed unique talent from a young age. However, his life took a sharp turn because he started to lose his hearing. In spite of facing such a big challenge, he never abandoned his hope. It was he who tried his best to continue living a life of music, presenting the world with great works. I admire him because his efforts and perseverance inspire me to pursue my dreams despite various challenges, making a big difference to my study and life. Your, Li Hua Polishing(润色定稿） Step 5 The musician who I admire most is Beethoven. Knowing that you want to learn about him, I’m eagerly writing to introduce him to you in detail. 亲爱的皮特， 我最欣赏的音乐家是贝多芬。知道你想了解他的情况，我迫不及待地写信向你详细介绍他。 贝多芬出生于一个音乐世家，从小就展现出独特的才华。然而，他的生活发生了急剧的转折，因为他开始失去听力。尽管面临如此巨大的挑战，他从未放弃希望。正是他尽了最大努力 ... ...
