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课件网) To write a brochure about surviving a disaster. To summarize the features of a good brochure and assess the sample. To introduce how to survive an earthquake in a detailed and logical way Learning Objectives Lead-in 1.Which disaster would you most want to give advice on 2.What advice could you provide The Writing Style of a Brochure ●keep the writing as simple as possible by dividing the text into sections. the service sound more exciting Write directly to the reader ● ● Use facts to make the product more real. Use opinion words to make If you're indoors ·Don'trun,butprotect yourself.Don'ttry to run out of the building during an earthquake The most important thing is to protect yourself as much as you can. ·Drop,cover and hold on.DROP down onto your hands and knees COVER your head and neck with your hands,armsor hard objects If possible,find a strong shelter nearby which will cover your whole body.HOLD ON to your shelter untilthe shaking stops. If you're outdoors ·Move away from anything that can fall Move to open areas.Buildings,trees,streetights and power lines can fall down during an earthquake. · Find a shelter where you can stay.If you are near objects that can fall,find a sheter to protectyourself from them. ·Wait before moving to another place. Objects may also fall fter an earthquake and there are always strong aftershocks.Observe carefully before you moveaway. If you're in a car ·Stop.S top your car as soon as you can,but avoid stopping near a building or under a tree · Stay seated. Stay calmin your car.The car's metal body can protect you from falling objects. ·Drive carefully when the quake stops.Avoid bridges that have been damaged or may be Read the brochure and focus on the structure Explore the logic in Situation 2 and 3 damaged by the aftershocks. If you're indoors: Don't run,but protect yourself. Drop,cover and hold on. If you're outdoors: Move away from anything that can fall. Find a shelter where you can stay. Wait before moving to another place. If you're in a car: Stayseated Drive carerully when the quake stops. 1.Does the author provide you with enough clear advice Yes /No for surviving an earthquake 2.Does the author offer specific advice for different -:4--— :_--0 Yes /No 3.Does the author clearly explain why /how you are going to follow the advice Yes /No Evaluate the sample in terms of its content by ticking Yes /No: Scoring Sheet:A Brochure Content (45 points) Clear advice (dos+don'ts) 120 point Specific advice for different situations /10 point Details about why /how /15 point Language (25 points) Simple /clear language /10 point Imperatives /10 point Present simple /5 point Design (30 points) Title:A clear topic /5 point Subtitles:well-designed sections /10 point Pictures (illustrations) /10 point Words in bold /5 point EMERGENCY How can we escape from a fire 发生火灾后，我们该怎样逃生 How to Escape from a Fire Disaster 1. Stay calm and don't ... ...
