人教版（2019）选择性必修 第三册Unit 4 Adversity and Courage writing学案（含答案）

选择性必修三Unit 4 The Story of Shackleton and His men on the Ship Endurance 谋篇章结构绘写作脉络 1.审篇章结构，定写作方向： Part1: Summary of the whole story(who,what,when,where,why ,how). Who:_____ What:_____ When:_____ Where:_____ Why:_____ How:_____ Part 2: What I think about the characters in the story(struggles they faced, their actions and motives ,my comments). Part3: How the story made me feel and my overall impressions of the expedition. 2.抽丝剥茧，汇写作要点 （1).The author described Shackleton as:_____ _____ . The author described the crew’s members as:_____ _____. （2).The relationship between Shackleton and his crew:_____ _____. （3).The struggles they face:_____ _____. （4).The motives for their actions:_____. （5).The part of the story you like most:_____ _____. 借思维导图梳理故事脉络 三.连词成句，完美成篇 This story is about the 1914-1916 (1)._____（远征）by Ernest Shackleton to (2)._____(第一次横穿）of Antarctic. For this task he used (3)._____(“坚韧号”轮船）, Endurance, with a 28-man(4)._____(船员）,including one stowaway. Shackleton is described as (5)._____ （沉着）and (6)._____（不屈不挠的）and takes his crew’s (7)._____(安全）(8)._____(serious). The rest of the crew are also (9)._____(勇敢无畏）， though a few are not very (10)._____(乐观）， and all were at times understandably (11)._____(担忧的）and (12)._____(绝望）about their situation. (13)._____(总之）， they (14)._____(仍然乐观）.This was helped by (15)._____(Shackleton 与他船员的良好关系） who (16)._____(信任他）and knew (17)._____(他会竭尽所能拯救他们）. The crew (18)._____(遇到很大困难）once Endurance (19)._____(被困在冰层）.Soon they had to (20)._____(弃船）and camped on the ice.They had to (21)._____(面对极端天气）and cold as well as a dangerous environment and all with (22)._____(有限的给养）.All of this (23)._____(增添了船员们的心理压力）,so they had to (24)._____(保持积极的心态）.Shackleton’s motive was always to (25)._____(保证他的船员存活下来）， and theirs was to last until he had found help. (26)._____(这个故事我最喜欢的部分是）is that (27)._____(尽管他们的远征没能实现目标）,They obtained a lot during their struggle for survival. This was (28)._____(由于Shackleton 的那种一定会获得帮助的恒心）and (29)._____(船员们的勇敢）in surviving for so long. (30)._____(我对的他们的印象是）is very positive as (31)._____(在这样的困境下他们一定吃尽苦头.）(32)._____(当我得知全体船员幸存下来时，感到非常激动.) 参考答案 审篇章结构绘写作脉络： Who:Shackleton ;the crew members What: attempt to make the first land crossing of Antarctica by ship Endurance ,got stuck on the Elephant Island When: 1914~1916 Where: Elephant Island Why: The ship got stuck in the ice How : Shackleton left to seek help 抽丝剥茧汇写作要点: （1）.Shackleton: brave; optimistic;positive;responsible;calm; perseverant;discipline;team spirit ....The crew’s members:a few are not very positive; worried/concerned;desperate; most of them remained optimistic;team spirit..(2)The crew trusted Shackleton firml ... ...