(
课件网) 2025年高考英语解题技巧 题型六 读后续写 名校模拟 Writing 1 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 （2023山东济南统考）I live in a small but lovely neighborhood. Our house is neither large nor luxurious, but it has a fairly big garden. My father loves his garden. He planted some seeds in it, and took good care of the plants, watering them, applying fertilizer, weeding and getting rid of bugs. He was never tired of doing all that stuff. But at that time, I didn't understand why working in the dirt excited him so much. Unfortunately, in the summer vacation before my senior high school, my father was seriously injured in an accident. He had to stay in bed for a while. My mother had several business trips, so she couldn't take care of the garden. I didn't want my father to worry. I said that I would take care of his garden until he recovered. I assumed that the little plants would continue to grow as long as they had water, and luckily it rained fairly often, so I didn't think much about the garden. One Saturday morning, my father said to me, "Christine, the vegetables should be about ready to be picked. Let's have a salad today!" I went out to the garden and was upset to see that the lettuce（生菜） leaves and carrots had been half eaten by bugs. There were hundreds of bugs all over them! I panicked for a moment but then I quietly went to the nearest supermarket to buy some vegetables. When I was making the salad, my mother came home and saw the bag from the supermarket in the kitchen. I was embarrassed and admitted, "Dad would like a salad, but the garden is a disaster. I don't want to disappoint him, so I went to the supermarket and bought some vegetables." My mother smiled, saying, "Honey, you know what is the right thing to do." 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him. Feeling guilty, I decided to do the right thing. 【写作指导】 剧本研读———找主主，知情情，解冲突 找主主 主要人物：I, my father 故事主题：改正错误，自我成长，属于"人与自我"的主题。 知情情 （原 文） 情节：爸爸热衷于园艺，但受伤后无法照料菜园。"我"承诺帮爸爸照顾好菜 园，却让菜被虫吃了一半而不能做蔬菜沙拉了。"我"用超市买来的菜做蔬菜沙 拉（冲突），被妈妈发现超市购物袋后尴尬地承认了一切。 情感：I———不理解爸爸对园艺的热爱；承诺照顾好菜园但没想太多；发现菜 被虫吃掉一半而恐慌；被妈妈发现真相而尴尬并承认一切;不想让爸爸失望。 my father———非常热衷于园艺；期待菜园里的菜做的蔬菜沙拉。 解冲突 （续 写） 面对爸爸的表扬，"我"为自己的所作所为感到内疚，主动向爸爸坦白并在爸爸 的帮助下弥补了错误，让菜园里的菜长得越来越好。 情感升华："我"开始喜欢园艺并理解了爸爸对园艺的热爱。 续写框架———十句五定 ①接着P1首句"My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him （当我把蔬菜沙拉拿给爸爸时，他看起来非常高兴）"通过语言、动作等描写爸爸的喜 悦和对"我"的表扬。 ⑤根据P2首句中的"Feeling guilty（感到内疚）"倒推，第一段段末描写"我" ... ...
