牛津译林版（2019）必修第一册Unit 3 Getting along with others Integrated skills 如何写英文日记素材

如何写英文日记 【写作任务】 假定你是某国际学校的一名学生。这周末你和朋友李华一起去爬山。请你用英语写一篇日记，记录爬山过程中一件令你印象深刻的事情，并谈一谈感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 日记的格式已为你写好，但不计入总词数。 15 October Sunny _____ 【写作指导】 一、审题定调 本写作任务要求写一篇日记，属于应用文。 日记通常由两部分组成，即书端和正文。书端专门用来记录写日记时的日 期和天气情况。通常，正文上方的左边（顶格）是日期，右边是当天的天气 情况（可省略）。 日记的正文是日记的主要部分，本写作的正文属于叙事性记叙文。我们以 按事件发生的先后顺序来展开叙述，最后说明自己的感受。 日记常用第一人称，当谈及其他对象时可根据实际情况采用相应的人称。 由于记载的内容通常已经发生，故多用过去时态。 二、谋篇布局 该日记的格式已给出，我们只需写出正文即可。根据提示，正文可分为三部 分： 第一部分：事件发生的背景； 第二部分：描述事件的经过和结果； 第三部分：对此事件的感想。 三、组织语言 第一部分：事件发生的背景。 ●... and ... went for a hike ... / ... invited ... to hike with him ... ●... loves climbing mountains and ... has a lot of experience but I'm new to ... ●As an experienced hiker, ... helped me a lot as I'm a newcomer to ... 第二部分：描述事件的经过和结果。 ●I climbed very slowly and got tired / exhausted easily, but ... always waited for and encouraged me. ●I found I ... and couldn't climb as quickly as ... But I was never left behind. ●... always slowed down to ..., offering a helping hand and words of encouragement. ●When I was tripped (绊) by ..., ... ran to me quickly ... ●Thanks to ..., I didn't fall down. ●I was thankful that ... was there, saving me from a fall when ... 第三部分：对此事件的感想。 ●From this experience, I've learned ... ●It's ... who taught me ... ●... reminded me of the meaning of friendship and mutual support. ●I'll always value our friendship. 【范文展示】 范文一 15 October Sunny This weekend, my friend Li Hua and I went for a hike in the nearby mountain. Li Hua loves climbing mountains and he has a lot of experience but I'm new to this activity. I climbed very slowly and got tired easily, but Li Hua always waited for and encouraged me. When I was tripped by a rock, Li Hua ran to me quickly and held me. Thanks to him, I didn't fall down. I was very touched. From this experience, I've learned that climbing a mountain with friends is not about reaching the top, but about helping each other along the way. He reminded me of the meaning of friendship and mutual support. 范文二 15 October Sunny This weekend, my friend Li Hua invited me to hike with him in the nearby mountain. As an experienced hiker, he helped me a lot as I'm a newcomer to this activity. I found I tended to get exhausted and couldn't climb as quickly as him. But I was never left behind. Li Hua always slowed down to wait for me, offering a helping hand and words of encouragement. I was thankful that he was there, saving me from a fall when I almost tripped over a rock. It's Li Hua who taught me climbing a mountain with friends is not about reaching the top, but ... ...