Unit 4 Hobbies 写作提优（含答案）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 译林版五年级上册Unit 4写作提优专训 介绍某人的爱好 方法指导 介绍某人的爱好，可按“三步四要素法”写作。第一步开头，引出人物；第二步正文，介绍人物的外貌、国籍、爱好、擅长程度四个要素；第三步结尾，表达对某人的评价。 素材积累 必备词汇 必备句型 开头 人名: Liu Tao, Yang Ling 身份: friend, classmate This is my friend Liu Tao. Tim is my classmate. 正文 外貌: eye, ear, nose, tall 国籍: China, the UK, Canada 爱好: play basketball and football, draw, play table tennis 擅长程度: play sth. well, be good at His eyes are big. He is tall. He lives in the UK. She likes reading books. She also likes painting. I usually draw in the park with my brother Tim. I can play basketball well, but I am not good at football. 结尾 评价: like, love I like playing with her very much. 以读促写(阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法) Hi! My name is Kelly. There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and me. We all have different hobbies. My father likes playing table tennis. He can play table tennis very well. My mother likes reading stories. She always reads stories to us. I like playing the piano. I usually play the piano for my family. I have a happy family. 小试身手(参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧) 假如你是 Amy，请你根据图片及所给内容提示，描述你的业余爱好。 要求：从图中任意选择两种爱好进行描述；语句通顺，逻辑清晰；不少于五句话。 I'm Amy. I have many hobbies. I like . . I like too . [提分练1] 同学们，你们有自己喜欢的动物朋友吗 它们有什么特征呢 又会做些什么呢 请用本单元所学的句型来给大家介绍一下你的动物朋友吧。 My animal friend [提分练2] 每个人都有自己的业余爱好。你的业余爱好是什么呢 请以“My hobbies”为题，写一篇短文和大家分享一下你的业余爱好。不少于5句话。 My hobbies [提分练3] 以 “My friends’ hobbies”为题写一篇小短文，介绍你的朋友们的业余爱好。 要求：条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺；标点正确，书写清晰规范；不少于50个单词。 My friends’ hobbies 参考答案 单元写作提优专训 1. three 2. playing table tennis 3. reading stories 4. playing the piano 5. happy 范文： I'm Amy. I have many hobbies. I like swimming. I often swim with my friends in summer. We are very happy. I like drawing too. I can draw well. I often draw pictures in the park. I like sharing my hobbies with you. [提分练1] My friend’s hobbies Tom is my good friend. He is tall and thin. He has short hair and big eyes. He likes playing basketball, and he is good at it. He likes playing football too. He can play football well. He likes swimming and skating. [提分练2] My hobbies I have some hobbies. I like playing football. I often play football with my friends in the football court behind my house. I think playing football is great fun. I also like playing computer games. I often play computer games with my cousins in my bedroom at weekends. Usually I go to the cinema on Friday evenings with my parents. Because watching films is my hobby too. [提分练3] My friends’ hobbies Ben and Lily are my friends. They have many hobbies. Ben likes playing basketball and football. And he is good at playi ... ...