Unit 2 A new student 写作提优（含答案）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 译林版五年级上册Unit 2写作提优专训 介绍学校 方法指导 介绍学校，可按“三步四要素法”写作。第一步开头，引出学校；第二步正文，具体描述学校的环境、场所、位置和功能四个要素；第三步结尾，表达同学们对学校的情感。 素材积累 必备词汇 必备句型 开头 school... This is our school. Welcome to our school! 正文 环境: beautiful, big, clean... 场所: building, classroom, playground, library... 位置: in, in front of, on the first/ second / third floor… 功能: study, play, read... The classroom is on the first floor. You can study in it. They're on the second floor. 结尾 like, love, nice... I love my school. 以读促写(阅读范文，补全表格，体悟写法) Hi,I'm Mike. Welcome to my school. Let me show you around. There are many classrooms on the first floor. They are very beautiful and bright. We study in these classrooms. We are happy every day. There's an art room on the second floor. We have art lessons in it. There's a computer room on the second floor, too. There are many computers in it. We have computer classes in it. On the third floor, there's a library. We can read books in it. We love our school. the first floor the second floor the third floor What's on it 1. _____ 3. _____ 5. _____ What can we do 2. _____ 4. _____ 6. _____ 小试身手(参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧) 假如你是 Nancy，你梦想中的学校是什么样的呢 根据所给提示写一写你梦想中的学校吧。 要求：条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范，不少于5句话。 提示: There is a / an… on the… floor. There are some / many… on the… floor. My dream school Hello, I am Nancy. This is my dream school. There is [提分练1] 请你根据下面的思维导图，以“ My school”为题，介绍一下你的学校。 要求：1.使用 there be 句型；2.语句通顺，书写规范，标点正确；3.不少于5句话。 My school [提分练2] 根据下面的表格，用所学的词汇和 there be 句型,以“ My school”为题,介绍一下你们的学校的教学设施并适当发挥(如教室的特点、用途等)。 要求：语句通顺，语义连贯，语法正确，不少于5 句话。 3F 电脑教室 图书室 美术教室 2F 音乐教室 乒乓球室 电脑教室 1F 教室 教室 教室 My school [提分练3] 向大家介绍一下你的学校吧！写一写你的学校有几间教室、几间电脑室…，以及它们所在的位置。不 少于5句话。 My school [提分练4] 请你以“ My house”为题，介绍一下你的家。要求：语句通顺，标点正确，不少于5句话，不包括已给句子。 My house My house is big and beautiful! 参考答案 单元写作提优专训 1. many classrooms 2. study 3. an art room, a computer room 4. have art lessons, have computer classes 5. a library 6. read books 范文： My dream school Hello, I am Nancy. This is my dream school. There is a tall building. There are twenty-four classrooms in it. My classroom is on the second floor. There is a table tennis room and two music rooms on the first floor. There are three computer rooms on the third floor. We often have computer lessons there. There is an art room on the fourth floor. We draw pictures there. There is a library on the fourth floor too. There is a big playground in front of the building. We can run and play football there in the afternoon. My ... ...