Unit 3 Our animal friends 写作提优（含答案）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 译林版五年级上册Unit 3写作提优专训 介绍动物朋友 方法指导 介绍动物朋友，可按“三步四要素法”写作。第一步开头，引出动物；第二步正文，介绍动物的年龄、外貌、特征、爱好四个要素；第三步结尾，表达自己对动物的情感。 素材积累 必备词汇 必备句型 开头 name, its, animal… Its name is Maomao. 正文 年龄: one, two, three... 外貌: eye, ear, nose, mouth, tail, body, arm, leg, foot, fur... 特征: fat, thin, big, small, strong, clever... 爱好: eat, jump, run, swim, play with balls, sleep... It is two years old. It has big eyes and a small nose. Its legs are short. It likes jumping. It can swim. 结尾 good, love... We are good friends. 以读促写(阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法) There are many kinds of animals in the world. My favourite animal is the panda. It's the national animal in China. Pandas look like big and fat bears. They are cute and fat. I like Hehua very much. Most of people call it Huahua. It has big eyes and a small nose. It has a round body. It's black and white. It likes bamboo and apples. It can climb the tree and swim slowly. How cute! 小试身手(参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧) 根据所给要求，请你以“ My animal friend”为题写一篇短文，介绍你的动物朋友。要求：语句通顺，逻辑合理；不少于五句话。 My animal friend I have an animal friend. I like it very much. It is [提分练1] 根据所给提示和要求,以“My animal friend”为题写一篇短文。 提示：我有一个动物朋友，它是白色的。它有四条腿和一条短尾巴。它有一对长耳朵。它会跑和跳。 要求:1.使用“ It has...”“ It can ...”句型; 2.语句通顺，书写规范，不少于5 句话。 My animal friend [提分练2] 同学们，你们有自己喜欢的动物朋友吗 它们有什么特征呢 又会做些什么呢 请用本单元所学的句型来给大家介绍一下你的动物朋友吧。 My animal friend [提分练3] 请你根据所给图片及提示完成一篇短文，不少于5句话。 提示: big, small, peaches, bananas, It is/has/can/likes... [提分练4] 从所给图片中选择至少两张图片，以“ My animal friends”为题写一篇短文。不少于5 句话。 My animal friends 参考答案 单元写作提优专训 1. panda 2. China 3. eyes 4. nose 5. body6. Bamboo 7. climb 8. swim 四范文： My animal friend I have an animal friend. I like it very much. It is two years old. It is black. It has a big and fat body. It has a long tail and a small nose. It has two big eyes. It can climb the tree. It likes fish very much. It likes sleeping. How cute! We are good friends. [提分练1] My animal friend I have an animal friend. It is a rabbit. It is white. It has red eyes and long ears. It has a small nose and a small mouth. It has four legs and a short tail. It can run fast. It can also jump. It is cute and fat. I often play with it. I like it very much. [提分练2] My animal friend I have an animal friend in my home. It's a cat. Its name is Mimi. It's white. And it's very beautiful . It has soft hair and a very long tail. It has two small ears, two big eyes and a small nose. It can run and jump. It can also climb trees. It likes balls. It often plays with a ball. I like playing with it after school. I love my animal friend. What about you Can ... ...