Unit 8 Dolls 写作提优（含答案）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 译林版四年级上册Unit 8写作提优专训 介绍外貌特征 话题分析 本单元我们学习了有关外貌特征的词汇。请结合本单元所学的内容，介绍一下你爸爸妈妈的外貌特征。 思路点拨 范文欣赏 My father and mother My father is tall and fat. His hair is short. His eyes are big, but his ears are small. His nose is big, and his mouth is big too. My mother is tall and thin. Her hair is long and black. Her eyes and nose are big. Her ears and mouth are small. She's very beautiful. I love my father and mother. 范文翻译 我的爸爸和妈妈 我的爸爸又高又胖。他的头发短。他的眼睛大，但他的耳朵小。他的鼻子大，他的嘴巴也大。我的妈妈又高又瘦。她的头发又长又黑。她的眼睛和鼻子是大的。她的耳朵和嘴巴是小的。她很漂亮。我爱我的爸爸和妈妈。 [提分练1] 假设你有一个可爱的玩具娃娃(如图)，请你根据图片提示，写一段话向大家介绍一下你的玩具娃娃。 [提分练2] 书面表达。看图，先补全左边女生的介绍，再仿写右边男生的介绍。(10分) My new friend is a girl. _____ She's tall. _____ She's _____ years old. _____ Her eyes are big. _____ Her hair is _____ . _____ She can _____ very well. _____ [提分练3] 李华有一位好朋友叫杨阳，下面的图片是关于他的一些信息。假设你是李华，请你以“ My good friend”为题，从整体形象、外貌特点、爱好、能力等方面来介绍一下你的好朋友吧。 要求：1.介绍需包含图片提示的信息；2.注意书写工整；3.不少于5句话。 My good friend [提分练4] 小朋友，你有喜欢的玩具吗 请挑选一个你最喜欢的玩具来进行描述吧！ 要求：1.语句通顺，表达明确；2.不少于 30个单词。 My _____ [提分练5] 同学们，通过本单元的学习，我们知道了如何介绍自己的玩具。 我们可以运用本单元的重点句型进行描述,如:“He’ s/ She’ s ...”“His/ Her... is/ are...”。当然还可以用上“He/ She can ... very well.”等句型。同学们在介绍的时候一定要注意代词 he，she，his，her以及 be动词的正确运用哦！ 参考答案 [提分练1] This is my doll. His hair is short. His mouth is big. His eyes are big too. But his ears are small. He is cool. I like him very much. [提分练2] 女生: eleven; long; play football 仿写男生: My new friend is a boy. He's thin/ tall. He's twelve years old. His eyes/ ears are small. His hair is short. He can skate very well. [提分练3] My good friend I'm Li Hua. This is my good friend Yang Yang. He's tall and kind. His robot is cute. He likes playing football. He can skate very well. He always plays with his robot. This is my good friend. Do you like him [提分练4] My robot My name is Sam. I have a robot. Look! My robot is tall. His head is small. But his eyes and mouth are big. Look at his nose. It's big and blue. My robot can sing and dance. He can talk too. My brother and I like playing with him together. This is my robot. Do you like him [提分练5] My doll Hello, I'm Mary. Look!I have a doll. She's tall and beautiful. She has a big head. Her eyes are big too. But her ears and nose are small. Look at her mouth. It's red and big. My doll can dance well. I often play with my doll in the evening. I like her very much. 21世纪教育网 www.21cnjy.com 精品试卷·第 2 页 （共 2 页） 21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com) ... ...