Unit 1 I like dogs 写作提优（含答案）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 译林版四年级上册Unit 1写作提优专训 介绍喜爱的动物 话题分析 本单元我们学习了有关动物的词汇。你喜欢什么动物？请结合本单元所学的内容，描述该动物的特征，介绍它的能力，以及它的喜好。学会用句型“I like...”来表达对动物的喜爱之情。 思路点拔 范文欣赏 My cat Mimi Look!I have a good friend Mimi. It's a white cat. It's two years old. It's cute. It can catch mice. It likes fish.It likes playing with balls. I like Mimi very much. Do you like cats and my good friend Mimi 范文翻译 我的猫--咪咪 看！我有一个好朋友咪咪。它是一只白色的猫。它两岁了。它很可爱。它会抓老鼠。它喜欢鱼。它喜欢玩球。我非常喜欢咪咪。你喜欢猫和我的好朋友咪咪吗？ [提分练1] 请以“My little dog'”为题，写一段话介绍一下你的小狗。它多大？它长什么样？它喜欢做什么？ My little dog [提分练2] Mary 很喜欢动物，请根据图片帮她介绍她的玩具动物们，描述可适当发挥。 Hello, I'm Mary. I like _____. I have three _____. Look! This is a _____. _____. This is a_____. _____ . And this is an _____ . _____. They're all _____ . I like them all. [提分练3] 同学们，你们有自己的动物朋友吗 它长什么样 它喜欢什么 请以“ My animal friend”为题,描述一下自己的动物朋友。 要求：1.语句通顺，表达明确；2.不少于30个单词。 My animal friend 参考答案 [提分练1] I have a little dog. It’s brown. It’s two years old. It has two big black eyes. It likes playing and running with me. We are good friends. I like my little dog. [提分练2] Hello, I’m Mary. I like animals. I have three toy animals. Look! This is a toy cat. It has big eyes. This is a toy dog. It's small. And this is an elephant. It's big and it has a long nose. They're all cute. I like them all. 解析：根据提示可知，前两句表达 Mary 喜欢动物，有三个玩具动物。然后分别介绍三个玩具动物(a toy cat; a toy dog; a toy elephant);点明每个玩具动物后,写一句描述,例如 It's big/ small/ fat/ thin... It's white... It has big eyes/ big ears/a long tail...;然后总结它们都很可爱( cute/ lovely)。 [提分练3] My animal friend Hello, I'm Lucy. I have an animal friend. It's a bird. It's beautiful. It's yellow. It's fat. It has a big mouth and two small feet. It likes singing. I like playing with my animal friend very much. Do you like my animal friend 21世纪教育网 www.21cnjy.com 精品试卷·第 2 页 （共 2 页） 21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)