Unit 8 At Christmas 写作提优（含答案）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 译林版五年级上册Unit 8写作提优专训 介绍节日 方法指导 介绍节日，可按“三步四要素法”写作。第一步开头，引出节日名称； 第二步正文，按照 First, Next, Then, Finally的顺序把节日活动叙述完整; 第三步结尾, 表达同学们的心情。 素材积累 必备词汇 必备句型 开头 名称: Christmas, Chinese New Year · We always have a lot of fun at Christmas. · I like Chinese New Year. 正文 First: buy presents, buy a Christmas tree, go to see Father Christmas Next: put some pretty things on the Christmas tree Then: put a stocking on our beds Finally: open our presents, eat a turkey · First, we buy presents for our family and friends. We sometimes go to see Father Christmas. · Next, we put some pretty things on the Christmas tree. · Then, we put a stocking on our beds. · Finally, we wake up early and open our presents. 结尾 心情: have a good time, have a lot of fun · We all have a good time! 以读促写(阅读范文，选择合适的句子补全表格，体悟写法) Hi,I'm Mike. We always have a lot of fun at Christmas. First, we buy a Christmas tree. Sometimes, we go to see Father Christmas. Next, we put some pretty things on the tree. We also put our presents under the tree. It looks great. Then, Christmas Eve comes. We put stockings on our beds and wait for presents. Finally, it is Christmas Day! We get up early and open our presents. We have a big lunch with our family. We eat a turkey and Christmas pudding. We all play happily. Order First Next Then Finally Things to do 1. _____ 2. _____ 3. _____ 4. _____ A. have a big lunch with our family B. get up early and open our presents C. buy a Christmas tree D. put stockings on our beds E. put our presents under the tree F. go to see Father Christmas G. wait for presents H. put some pretty things on the tree 小试身手(参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧) 请围绕 “On Chinese New Year’s Day”这一话题, 把你新年做的事写下来。 要求: 1.用“ First… Next… Then… Finally…”描述; 2.词数50左右。 On Chinese New Year's Day [提分练1] 同学们，本单元我们学习了有关圣诞节的知识，能运用 buy，put等动词及短语描述圣诞节的一些活动与习俗。同时我们也掌握了一系列表示先后顺序的副词结构。现在请你结合实际并发挥想象,以“At Christmas”为题,介绍你的朋友 Helen 是如何度过圣诞节的。 [提分练2] 同学们，一年一度的圣诞节你们过得愉快吗 请结合本单元所学的知识并联系实际情况，以“At Christmas”为题，描述一下你和家人或朋友是如何度过圣诞节的。 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯；2.不少于 50个单词。 At Christmas [提分练3] 请根据图片提示,以“At Christmas”为题,用上 first、next、then 和 finally这些词,介绍一下 Helen 是怎么样过圣诞节的。 要求：语句通顺，语法正确，语义连贯，不少于50个单词。 At Christmas [提分练4] 请你根据所给提示，以“Christmas fun”为题写一篇短文描述一下你和你的家人是怎样过圣诞节的。不少于5句话。 提示:first, next, then, finally, buy …for …, a Christmas tree, put …on/under …, open presents, sing and dance, have a big lunch, have a good time Christmas fun 参考答案 单元写作提优专训 三、1. C F 2. H E 3. D G 4. B A 四、范文： On Chinese New Year’s Day I am happy o ... ...