Unit 6 My e-friend 写作提优（含答案）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 译林版五年级上册Unit 6写作提优专训 介绍人物 方法指导 介绍人物，可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步开头，引出人物； 第二步正文，介绍人物的性格外貌、国籍、兴趣爱好三个要素； 第三步结尾，对人物进行评价。 素材积累 必备词汇 必备句型 开头 姓名: Mike, Lily, Tim 年龄: eleven, twelve, thirteen, twenty · This is my friend. His name is Mike. · She is eleven years old. 正文 性格外貌: strong, kind, active, eye, ear, nose, tall 国籍: China, Canada, America 兴趣爱好: play football, sing songs, draw pictures, cook, dance · She has big eyes and a small nose. · She is kind. · He is thin and tall. · She is from Canada. · She likes playing football. · He is good at dancing. 结尾 评价: like, love, enjoy, role model · He is my role model. ·I like my e-friend. 以读促写( 阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法) Hi, everyone. This is my e-friend Anna. She is 12 years old. She's very beautiful . She has big eyes and long hair. She is from Canada. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes singing, dancing and swimming. At weekends, she usually studies Chinese with her mother. She sometimes chats with me on the Internet. 小试身手(参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧) 请你根据思维导图，写一篇短文介绍你的网友 Tom。不少于5句话。 My e-friend is Tom. [提分练1] 同学们，本单元我们学习了如何描述网友或者朋友的情况。你一定有好朋友或者网友吧，请介绍一下他(她)，包括他(她)的姓名、年龄、兴趣爱好等方面。 [提分练2] (徐州市贾汪区2023—2024学年五年级(上册)期末)请根据提示，用英文介绍你的一位朋友。 要求：1. 条理清晰，用词恰当，语句通顺，语法正确； 2. 书写工整、规范，正确使用标点符号； 3. 不少于5句话。 My good friend [提分练3] 请根据表格信息，以“My friend”为题，介绍一下你的朋友王兵。 Name Age Hometown Subjects After school Wang Bing 11 Nanjing Chinese, Maths, English, PE, Music, Art play football 要求：围绕以上几点展开描述；语句通顺，语法正确；不少于5句话。 My friend [提分练4] 根据信息卡并作适当发挥，写一篇短文介绍一下你的朋友 Lucy。 Name: Lucy Age: 11 Father: teacher, teaches Maths Mother: worker, makes toys Subjects: English & Music Hobbies: drawing & dancing 要求：语句通顺，语法正确，语义连贯，不少于40个单词。 参考答案 单元写作提优专训 三、1.12/ twelve 2. eyes 3. studies 4. singing 5. dancing 四、范文： My e-friend is Tom. He is twelve years old. He is very kind. He is from the US. His father is a doctor. His mother is a Maths teacher. He likes swimming and playing basketball. At weekends, he often reads storybooks and sometimes goes to the farm. I like my e-friend. [提分练1] My e-friend I have an e-friend. He's Peter. He is a tall boy and he lives in the UK. He is twelve years old. He can speak English and a little Chinese. He studies Chinese after school. He likes PE. But he isn't good at Maths. Sometimes I help him with his homework. He likes watching films. I like playing chess with him on the Internet. I think he is very clever because he beats me many times. He wants to come to China in the future. [提分练2] My good friend Nancy is my good friend. She is 12 years old ... ...