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课件网) 读后续写 Writing skills of conveying feelings： The Taxi Ride I'll Never Forget Principle of consistency（原文一致原则） The content should be cohesive,coherent, and consistent. Three Principles of Writing Principle of being postive （正能量原则） The story should be positive and promote core socialist values. Principle of tortuous （曲折性原则） The story should have twists and turns, where the characters encounter difficulties or problems ,but will solve them eventually. logic plot structure positive energy How to write logically 续写，就是接着说，展开说。 Well begun is half done. Steps: 评分细则 考生了解评分细则，有助于平时用此评标来衡量和要求自己，清楚自己的弱点，明确努力的方向。 评分原则 1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。 4. 评分时，主要从以下四个方面考虑： (1) 与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度； (2) 内容的丰富性； (3) 应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性； (4) 上下文的连贯性。 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 6. 如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。 七个 “不” 一不增加人物 二不增加旁支情节 三不用过多对话 四不用负能量结局 五不在文末设置悬念 六不偏离原文主题 七不违背逻辑常理 三个原则 原文一致原则 正能量原则 曲折性原则 通读全文，理清脉络 细读首句，构思框架 增加细节，展开续写 修改润色，整洁誊写 四个步骤 七三四法则 解题方法 a hospice This is a special hospital for people who are dying, where their practical and emotional needs are dealt with as well as their medical needs. What would you do if you were very old and you had to go to a hospice in 3 hours characters time place event moral sad, lonely... sympathetic，satisfied... How did the author successfully convey these feelings to you Read for Understanding an old lady I Read the story and fill in the blanks (5mins) A good novel arouses emotional echoes in readers' hearts. On her way to a hospice, the old lady asked the driver to drive through the city to recall her memory of her former life . at midnight on the way to a hospice Sometimes small things can be important moments in our life, and we need to cherish what we have now. touching Pick out the parts that impress you most. Read for Details sad, lonely... “For hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the building where she had once worked. We drove through the neighbourhood where she and her husband had lived. Sometimes she asked me to just slow down while she sat staring into the darkness, saying nothing.” showed sat staring into the darkness, saying Read and find more details that describe the lady (2mins) once worked drove through had lived had asked me to just slow down nothing For hours Read for Details sad, lonely... Read and find more details that describe the lady (2mins) details actions “She hugged me tightly.” “I saw her eyes shining with tears.” fa ... ...
