应用文练习写作:短文(森林火灾)+感谢信(热情款待)+倡议书(共读经典) 应用文写作 (湖南省长沙市湖南师大附中2024届高三上学期月考五) 你校英文报为提高学生对自然灾害的了解,新开设了Natural Disasters专栏,请你以“Forest Fires”为标题,为该专栏写一篇短文。 内容包括: 1.形成的原因;2.造成的危害(至少两点);3. 呼吁预防。 写作分析 1这篇文章偏说明文特点,介绍性,客观性,呼吁性要兼顾,按照命题要求已经可以很好地划分结构,第一段简介+形成原因,第二段造成的危害,第三段呼吁预防森林大火;不过也可以第一段引出话题,第二段介绍原因和危害,第三段再呼吁; 2语料积累: 形成原因———be caused by.../ result from....; ....lead to/contribute to/ result in/ account for/ bring about....; ... be responsible for.../ ... be to blame for.../.... trigger... 产生的危害———用非谓语动词做结果状语是最常见的:threatening.../worsening.../ causing.../leaving.../affecting... 或者使用总述+分述(with的复合结构或者including列举)的模式:The impacts of forest fires are extensive and far-reaching,with habitats lost, wildlife killled and ecosystem disrupted. The damage caused by forest fires is immense, inlcuding destroying habitats, killing wildlife and disrupting ecosystem. 呼吁预防———It is high time that we should do sth.或 倒装句:Preventing forest fires is crucial. Only when each of us are mindful of our actions can we significantly reduce the occurrence of forest fires. One possible version: Forest fires Forest fires are a kind of natural disaster that usually occurs in winter and spring, when the dry leaves can be easily lit by any kinds of fire sources. The fire can burn down a wide range of plants, make animals living in the forests homeless and even take away their lives. Moreover, the greenhouse gases released during the burning will contribute to global warming. Considering the damage caused by the forest fire, it's high time that the government and all individuals should take measures to prevent it. The polished version: Forest fires Forest fires, powerful destructive flames that spread rapidly and devour everything in its path, cause massive damage every year. Various factors trigger the occurrence of forest fires, including natural events like lightning strikes and record-high temperature. Whereas, human negligence like leaving campfire unattended or throwing cigarette butts irresponsibly, is to blame for the majority of the fires. The consequences can be overwhelmingly catastrophic, with vast areas reduced to ruins, threatening wildlife and ecosystem, as well as massive amounts of toxic gases released into the atmosphere, worsening air pollution. Given the damage, it is crucial that we each shoulder our share of responsibility and follow fire safety guidelines to ensure a safer and greener forest. (202409A9协作体-感谢信) 假设你是李华,假期去留学生Judy的家乡游玩时受到了她的热情款待。请你给她写一封邮件表达谢意,内容包括:1.写邮件目的;2.得到好友的哪些款待;3.表达谢意。 写作分析 1这篇文章传统的感谢信,三段开头点名写作目的,Body部分回顾受到的热情款待,结尾再次表达感谢。学生 ... ...
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