Module 1 How to learn English? writing 书面表达 作文 分析 范文（含答案）外研版八年级英语上册

八年级上册 书面表达 作文 范文（一） 八年级上英语 Module 1 写作稿 (第一稿)及分析 “My advice on learning English” 写作任务： 最近，《21世纪英语报》正在同学们中征集提高英语口语能力的方法。请你参考Diana的建议，并结合自己的学习经验，用英语写一篇短文，参与此次活动。 参考句式：1. It’s a good idea to… 2. Why not…..3. How about….. 4. Try to/not to… 要求：1. 中心突出，语意连贯，表达清晰，书写规范； 2. 词数70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总次数。 写作思路及策略： 一稿作文： _____ _____ _____ _____ ——— ——— ——— _____ [审题分析] 语篇类型：说明文 主题语境：人与自我———探索语言学习规律和方法 写作要点：提出提高英语口语能力的建议和方法 写作素材：1.问题：如何提高英语口语能力 2.建议：与说英语的人交朋友、创办英语社团、多说多练 语篇结构：三段式 总-分-总 注意事项：1.给别人提建议用第二人称 you 2.时态：一般现在时 2.提建议时采取多种句式和结构，避免单调。 [一稿作文问题]： 开头不能紧扣主题，以three basic questions开头，本应写建议。 开头语言不吸引人，中式英语严重。 Many good students are not good at speaking. Here is my advice(on how to improve it ) Speaking is difficult for most English learners. I’d like to share some of my suggestions. 中间段落： 分段不清晰，所有建议应该在第二段。 第二，要准确使用表示逻辑关系的连词，如 first，second，third，其它一律不要乱填。 the first piece of advice. 第三，三条建议之间 没有逻辑，vocabulary内容 不应放在第一条（首要重要的），不应是提升词汇或第一条就写 make foreign friends。 第四，提建议句型 单一。无新意。 结尾： 不扣题，忘记主题是什么了。写作目的是：分享 以提升口语，让大家都有帮助，学以致用。 I hope my advice helps and all of you can make progress in speaking English. In short,practice makes perfect. I’m sure you can make it.(适当引用名人名言)。 写作策略：有条理 [解决方案]： 1.用好本模块表示建议句型。 2.文本中的好建议：always speak English in class, speak English as much as possible，do not be shy, just try, try to use the vocabulary, practise speaking more often, look for some English-speaking people and make friends with them, start an English club with friends, 其他的好建议：set up an English corner 运用and,or,so,because,but,first,then等连接词将以上要点连成文章,并注意句型多样化。 结尾好句子： I hope these ways can help improve your English speaking I'm sure we can learn English well in these ways. I hope the above suggestions could be helpful in improving your English speaking. If you don't give up, you'll find that it's not as hard as you think to improve your English speaking. Wish you can improve your English speaking. I am looking forward to chatting with you in English. I hope my advice can help you. 范文1： Many students are poor at English speaking. Here is my advice. Try to practice speaking English more in your spare time. It is a good idea to speak with English speakers. You can talk about your school life and your family. Try to use new words in a conversation. Do not be shy, and just try. Why not watch more English movies You can share the most wonderful parts of the movies in English with your friends. You ... ...