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课件网) Section B Period 5 Project (3a-3c) 单元主题写作 Unit 1 Animal Friends 一、写作思路 本单元话题为“动物”。通过对动物的了解, 运用所学词汇、句式、语法去准确介绍动物的外貌、习性及生存环境,表达对动物的喜爱, 了解动物与环境的关系, 生发“ 人与动物和谐共生”这一人文情怀, 初步树立“ 热爱大自然、保护大自然”的环保意识。 二、写作步骤 第一步: 话题引入, 开篇点题, 引出你要介绍的动物。 第二步: 详细介绍, 介绍动物的特征, 如: 动物的名称、年龄、栖息地及其性格特点、喜好等。 第三步: 做评价, 抒发对此动物的感情, 并号召人们爱护动物。 三、素材积累 开头句 1. This is a photo of ... 2. Do you like... 3. What’s your favourite animal 4. Do you know many animals are in danger 5. Animals are our friends. 7. Let’s go and see... 6. I have a plan to build a zoo to... 8. I think a good zoo is home to many animals like... 中间句 1. My favourite animal is... 2. He/ She is from... 3. He/ She is...years old. 4. But I think it’s kind of... 5. Don’t throw any food to them, because... 6. We should learn to live peacefully with... 7. Why must they live in the zoo 8. There are also many donated pets... 9. They are a symbol of friendship... 10. They are so kind to people that... 11. They’re too shy to live in noisy places. 12. Never try to take a photo with them. 13. It’s dangerous to get close to them. 14. Think of a good way to protect them... 结尾句 1. I love the zoo, because I want the... 2. I’m happy to see so many people... 3. Let’s go together to do something to give them a safe home! 4. How happy they are! 5. I love animals. I love nature. 6. I believe all people can live in a friendly way with these animals. 四、以读促写 在我家附近的动物园里, 有一头小象叫Laura。她来自非洲, 7 岁了, 喜欢吃水果和草。Laura对人们很友好。她喜欢玩水。她也喜欢和人们玩耍。她既高大又强壮(strong), 还有一个长鼻子, 她的牙(teeth)也很长。我非常喜欢她。 要求: 1. 内容完整; 语句通顺; 语意连贯; 2. 可适当发挥; 3. 不少于60 词。 写作模板 引出话题 There is a baby elephant in the zoo... 详细介绍 Her name is ... She is from ... She’s ... She likes ... She is tall and has... 做评价 How cute she is! I like her... 写作指导 1. 正确使用描写动物的形容词 2. 正确使用动词like 3. 主题: 人与自然———自然生态 子主题: 介绍动物 时态: 一般现在时 高分作文 There is a baby elephant in the zoo near my home. Her name is Laura. She is from Africa. She's seven years old. She likes eating fruit and grass. She's friendly to people. She likes playing with water. And she also likes playing with people. She is tall and has a long nose and four strong legs. Her teeth are long, too. Her ears are very big. How cute she is! I like her very much. 名师点评 本文按照题目要求, 对来自非洲的小象Laura 进行了描述, 对其外貌特征、行为习性等进行了详细介绍。 添彩点: ①作者熟练运用本单元所学短语be from, be friendly to, play with 描述动物的特征；② there be 句型和感叹句“How cute she is!”的运用, 体现了作者的语言表达能力, 增强了文章的感染力。 五、迁移写作 根据下列提示写一篇60 词左右的英语短文, 介 ... ...
