阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Leah had been trying for Auditions (试演) for All-State Band. Then, the day before the audition, she met into Rachel Jacobs. “So, Leah, I hear you are auditioning for All-State. Do you really want to embarrass yourself ” Rachel said snottily (自负的). Rachel and Leah had been fighting for first chair in the school band ever since Leah had gotten it. “Rachel, I’m still first chair,” Leah replied. That afternoon, Mr. Johnson, the school band director, stood up to make an announcement. “Kids,” he said, “today Rachel Jacobs would like to challenge Leah Foster for first chair.” Leah wasn’t worried; Rachel had challenged her four times and nothing had come of it. However, Leah hit the note wrong, and her sound was not good at all. Rachel, on the other hand, played perfectly. Leah was shameful. It was one of the band pieces she should have known. Rachel was given first chair, and Leah left the band room with tears. She went through the rest of her classes in a haze. “We’re leaving for the audition in one hour!” said Mr. Foster the next morning. “I don’t feel well. Maybe next year,” said Leah. Then she burst into tears and ran from the room. Her mom followed her into her bedroom and sat on the foot of her bed. “Oh, Leah. First of all, I’ve heard you play your song, and you’re not going to shame yourself. Bravery isn’t about not being scared—it means doing something despite the fact that you’re afraid. And if you go out there and do your best, we’ll be proud of you, no matter what the outcome.” Leah’s mom smiled. “So what do you say Do we have an audition to go to ” “Yeah, I guess,” Leah replied. “Good girl! Get dressed now. We still have half an hour.” Leah sat outside the audition room nervously grasping her flute (笛子). Finally, they called her name. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Leah stepped onto the audition stage. _____ Paragraph 2: “Congratulations! You deserve it,” Leah said, sticking out her hands. _____ 文章大意 这篇文章讲述了Leah在参加All-State Band试演前的一系列经历。Leah在学校乐队中与Rachel争夺第一把交椅,两人之间的竞争一直很激烈。在一次挑战中,Leah因为紧张而表现不佳,失去了第一把交椅的位置。第二天,面对即将到来的试演,Leah一度想要放弃,但在母亲的鼓励下,她重新振作,勇敢地参加了试演。最终,Leah在试演中表现出色,赢得了评委的认可,并与曾经的对手Rachel建立了新的友谊。这个故事展现了勇气、自我挑战和友谊的重要性. 故事山分析 引入:Leah在学校乐队中与Rachel争夺第一把交椅,两人之间的竞争一直很激烈. 上升:Rachel挑战Leah,Leah在挑战中表现不佳,失去了第一把交椅的位置. 高潮:Leah在母亲的鼓励下,勇敢地参加了All-State Band的试演. 下降:Leah在试演中表现出色,赢得了评委的认可. 结局:Leah与Rachel建立了新的友谊,两人的关系得到了改善. 五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应 伏笔:Leah与Rachel之间的竞争关系. 回应:在续写中,Leah在试演中的出色表现赢得了评委的认可,同时也赢得了Rachel的尊重,两人关系有所改善. 伏笔:Leah ... ...
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