(
课件网) Period Ⅴ Writing———诗评 UNIT 5 POEMS 点拨 写作技巧 积累 写作素材 /////// 1 2 4 /////// /////// 示例 分步写作 3 /////// 跟踪 落实检查 1 点拨 写作技巧 一、技法指导 写诗评就是要求我们就有关诗歌进行分析和评论。当然这必须建立在很好地把握原诗主旨的基础之上，而非罗列原诗的诗句。一首好的诗歌，自然有动人之处。可侧重诗中最打动你的某一方面抒发自己的感想。 根据高考的要求，中学阶段的诗评不可能做过多的发挥，评价诗歌要言简意赅，写出精彩之处，不要拖沓冗长，重复表述。 二、篇章结构 2 积累 写作素材 一、亮点词汇 1.title v.(给书籍、乐曲等)加标题 2.be popular with/among 受……的欢迎 3.typical adj. 典型的；有代表性的 4.feel the sense of... 感觉到…… 5.creative adj. 有创意的 6.arouse v. 引起 7.appeal to 吸引 8.be based on 基于…… 9.have an influence on 对……有影响 10.be set in 以……为背景 11.refer to 涉及 二、高级句式 1.首段：介绍诗歌及作者 ①Here is a poem titled Thoughts in a Quiet Night written by Li Bai in the Tang Dynasty，which is popular with Chinese readers. 这是一首唐代诗人李白所作的题为《静夜思》的诗，深受中国读者的喜爱。 ②What do you think of the poems in the Tang Dynasty 你认为唐诗怎么样？ ③These poems are popular among Chinese people and also attract lots of foreigners. 这些诗深受中国人的喜爱，也吸引了许多外国人。 2.中段：简述诗歌内容 ①This poem is about nature and life，whose language is vivid and interesting. 这首诗是关于自然和生活的，其语言生动有趣。 ②A Spring Morning is my favourite poem because its words are beautiful and I can feel the sense of spring in it. 《春天的早晨》是我最喜欢的诗，因为它的诗句很美，我能从中感受到春天的感觉。 3.尾段：评论感受 ①I strongly recommend you to read the poem and enjoy its beauty. 我强烈建议你读这首诗，欣赏它的美。 ②This poem expresses the poet’s gratitude to mother’s love and teaches us to respect our parents and appreciate their efforts. 这首诗表达了诗人对母爱的感激，并教会我们尊重父母，感恩他们的付出。 3 示例 分步写作 请根据唐朝诗人李绅的《悯农》，用英语写出这首诗的大意，并说明诗中所蕴含的作者的思想，以便向你的外国朋友推荐。 Sympathy on the Farmers At noon，farmers are weeding， Down the field，sweat is dropping. Who knows rice on a dish， Every grain is full of toiling. 注意：1.不得照抄短诗原文；2.必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开；3.必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语义连贯；4.短文不能写成诗歌形式。 第一步：要点翻译 1.这是李绅的一首诗，名叫《悯农》。 Here is a poem by Li Shen and it _____ “Sympathy on the Farmers”. 2.李绅很受中国读者欢迎。 Li Shen _____ Chinese readers. 3.夏日正午时刻，外面天气炎热；农民依然在地里除草。 _____ at this summer noon time. The farmers _____. is titled is popular with It is so hot outside are still weeding in the fields 4.他们全身湿透，汗水频繁地掉在庄稼生长的土地上。 _____ and their sweat is frequently _____.The crops grow there. 5.我认为对今天的年轻一代来说，理解这首诗歌并珍惜每粒粮食是很重要的。 I think _____ the poem and treasure every grain. They are wet all over falling into the soil it’s very i ... ...
