阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Our family outing to the all-you-can-eat buffet turned into an evening to remember. The atmosphere was lively and busy, with the noise of plates and the sound of conversations creating a warm and inviting setting. The smell of freshly cooked food floated through the air, inviting everyone to try a little bit of everything. The buffet was a feast for the senses, with steaming trays of dishes from all over the world. The kids were particularly thrilled at the sight of the dessert section, which they had been eagerly longing for all week. Their eyes widening at the array of cakes, ice creams, and pastries, they quickly made plans to sample everything. As we sat down to enjoy our meals, chatting cheerfully about the various food options, my husband’s attention was drawn to an elderly man standing by the chocolate milk dispenser (分液器). The man seemed determined, but his hands were shaking, making it difficult for him to fill two glasses. My husband watched him for a moment, a concerned look on his face. “Now, how on earth is he going to carry that milk back to his table ” he wondered aloud, his eyes narrowing in thought. He noticed the man’s expression of concentration and effort, and a wave of sympathy made him restless. The kids, absorbed in their plates, hadn’t noticed, but my husband’ couldn’t look away. I glanced at my husband and raised my eyebrows(眉毛) with a knowing smile. He immediately understood my silent message. The next moment, without a word, he got up from his seat and approached the elderly gentleman. I watched as he gently placed a hand on the man’s shoulder; offering a kind smile. I felt a warm wave of pride and admiration for my husband. His kind-hearted nature always managed to shine through in moments like these, making me realize how lucky I was to have him by my side. 注意: 1.续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: “May I help you with that ” my husband asked kindly. _____ _____ Paragraph 2: As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal. _____ _____ 文章大意:一家人去自助餐厅用餐,氛围热闹,美食琳琅满目,孩子们对甜品区满怀期待。用餐时,丈夫注意到一位老人在巧克力牛奶分液器前手抖难以倒牛奶,面露关切,“我” 心领神会,丈夫起身走向老人,准备帮忙,“我” 为丈夫的善良暖心之举感到骄傲。 故事山分析: 开场:描绘自助餐厅热闹欢快、美食诱人的场景,一家人开启用餐,营造轻松愉悦开端,吸引读者融入情境。 上升:聚焦老人倒牛奶困境,丈夫留意且内心纠结,紧张氛围渐起,吊起读者好奇心,想知后续发展。 转折:“我” 与丈夫无声交流,丈夫起身相助,打破前文老人的窘迫局面,情节转折,凸显人性温暖。 下降:无明显下降情节,故事走向温馨收尾。 结局:丈夫助人后回座,一家人继续用餐,给人意犹未尽之感,留下温暖余韵。 伏笔及续写中的回应: 伏笔:开篇渲染自助餐的热闹忙碌,“The atmosphere was lively and busy...” 。回应:后续老人的出现融入这热闹场景,却又因手抖与周围格格不入,形成反差,更突出老人需要帮助,为丈夫 ... ...
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