Continuation Writing——— Action & Emotional Descriptions 构建动作链Action-chain Strategy 1: Sb did A, did B and did C The boys rushed to the lake, took off the clothes and and jumped into the water. Strategy 2: Doing A, sb did B and did C She rushed happily into the rain, singing and dancing. Strategy 3: Having done A, sb did B and did C Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out. (queue排队) Strategy 4: Done sth, sb did… Moved by the story, the child began to weep(抽泣). Equipped/Armed with the technology, our contest made a hit. (成功或受欢迎) 有…的支持 with the help of with the support of be equipped with the technology be armed with the technology Strategy 5: 独立主格结构--主语1(次要)+非谓语,主语2(主要)+谓语 The bell was ringing.(铃声响了) The students entered the classroom.(学生进入教室) 合并后:The bell ringing, all the students entered the classroom. 她颤抖着手,缓缓打开了包裹。 Her hands was trembling. She opened the parcel slowly. 合并后:Her hands trembling, she opened the parcel. 情绪描写Emotional Descriptions 介词短语(to/in/with) “with/without+宾语”表示“有着…”“没有…” To one’s + 名词”表示“让某人…的是” To her astonishment(让她吃惊的是) In+名词,表示“…地” In delight(=delightedly), they entered the room, singing and dancing. 情绪adj+as sb+be动词,sb (still) do sth Nervous as he was , David became determined to finish the race. 尽管很紧张, David 决心完成赛跑。 sb was so+adj+that … 某人如此…以至于 He was so scared that he was unable to utter a single word. 他吓得一句话也说不出来 4. adj. and adj.(并列情绪adj), 主+谓 Excited and pleased, the boys rushed to the lake, laughing and dancing. 5. 无灵主语(n+v) 用法是 主语(情感名词)+ 谓语动词(有生命的) 通常用“一阵感情/一股情绪…”因此,“a sense(可以换) of + N + V” 万能句型: a sense/feeling/wave/ripple/flush/surge/pang of + 情感名词+ welled up in one’s heart/ washed over sb./ flooded over sb. /surged through sb./took hold of/swept over sb(其他谓语动词可以替换) A ripple/flush/wave/surge of sadness welled up inside him.他内心涌起一股悲伤。 A wave of happiness and excitement seized/took hold of/swept over her.她内心涌起一阵… 【常见的情绪名词】 【常见的谓语动词】 happiness, joy, delight开心快乐 excitement/exhilaration(/ ɡ z l re ( )n/) 兴奋; surprise/astonishment/shock/amazement 惊奇; shame 羞耻羞愧; despair 绝望; anger/annoyance(/ n ns /) /irritation(/ r te ( )n/)/fury(/ fj ri/) 愤怒; regret 遗憾;后悔 sorrow /grief (/ɡri f/)悲伤; horror /fear/scare惊恐; anxiety 焦虑; sympathy同情; disappointment/frustration/upset 失望/沮丧; satisfaction/contentment 满意; puzzlement/confusion 困惑; eagerness/thirst(/θ st/)/craving(/ kre v /)渴望; tension 紧张; Uneasiness/ worry/concern 不安/担忧; awkwardness/embarrassment 尴尬 self-reproach/shame/guilt/(/ɡ lt/)/ conscience(/ k n ns/ )内疚/自责 Blush/shyness/bashfulness 害羞/腼腆 Disgust/hate 厌/憎恶 seize/overwhelm sb控制 take hold of sb 控制 choke sb噎住堵住; creep sb/o ... ...
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