专题09 材料作文（原卷版+解析版）2025年上海16区中考英语一模试题分项汇编

专题09 材料作文（解析版） 宝山区 九、书面表达 64．Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。) 假设你是李华，你在学校的国际交流活动中结识了一位英国留学生Michael。他对中国学校的校园生活很感兴趣。你决定写一封邮件给他，向他介绍你的校园生活。你可以从校园环境(campus environment)、学校午餐(school lunch)、传统节庆活动(traditional festivals and celebrations)、社团活动(club activities)中选择1-2个方面进行介绍，让Michael感受到中国校园的独特魅力。 注意： 1.信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。 Dear Michael, _____ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Michael, How are you I’d like to share my campus life with you. My school is big and beautiful. There is a big playground and a new library. The dining room is big and clean and the school lunch is very delicious. There are different kinds of clubs in my school. I join the basketball club. We often play basketball together. Last month, we won the first prize in the campus basketball competition. New Year’s Day is coming soon, and we will hold a grand party to celebrate it. I like my campus life very much. How about your campus life Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可选择1-2个方面介绍。可适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候朋友并表明写作目的； 第二步，详细介绍自己的校园生活； 第三步，表达对校园的喜爱并询问对方的校园生活怎么样。 [亮点词汇] ① share...with...与……分享…… ②take part in参加 ③ win the first prize获得一等奖 [高分句型] ①There is a big playground and a new library. (There be句型，就近原则) ②New Year’s Day is coming soon, and we will hold a grand party to celebrate it. (动词不定式作目的状语) 崇明区 九、书面表达 64．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是初三学生林东，下周有一所国外姐妹学校来你校进行为期两周的学习交流活动。学校请你给来校交流的外国同龄学生做一个主题为“交流文化、增进友谊”的发言。你的发言必须包含以下两点： 1. 向对方学生介绍一项具有中国特色的传统文化 2. 谈谈两周中你准备为这批外国学生安排什么跨文化交流活动(参观文化景点、文化交流活动、文化习俗体验等) (注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) _____ 【答案】例文 Dear friends, Hello! I'm Lin Dong, a student from Grade 9. Welcome to our school! I’m very happy to introduce traditional Chinese culture to you. It’s Chinese calligraphy. It’s an art of writing Chinese characters with a brush. It has a long history and is very beautiful. During these two weeks, we have planned some cross-cultural activities for you. We’ll visit some famous cultural places like the Forbidden City. There, you can see many old buildings and learn about Chinese history. We’ll also have cultural exchange activities. You can try to write Chinese calligraphy and make Chinese paper-cutting. And we’ll have a Chinese f ... ...