阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had run away from home after finishing high school. My parents had insisted I go to college, but I was tired of school. I hated it. I was determined not to go. And, besides, my father was too strict. I had too many chores to do around the farm. I haled the work! There had been a quarrel between my father and me. I threw some things into a bag and left angrily, as my father shouted after me, “If you leave, don’t come back!” My mother cried openly, and I had seen those tears during a hundred sleepless nights. Then it was time to write a letter to my father. Dear Dad, It’s been more than a year now. I’ve traveled east to west. I’ve had dozens of jobs. None of them amounted to very much. Always the same questions: “How much education have you got ” It seems they always want college men for the good jobs. Dad, you and Mother were right about everything. I know now that the work on the farm didn’t hurt me, and I’m convinced I need college. I’m also convinced that both of you loved me. Dad, I’ve learned a lesson. I want to come home. I know you said if I left, I couldn’t come back, but I’m praying you’ll change your mind. I want to come home and be a part of the family again. Give my love to Mother and the girls. Love, Your son As I folded the letter and put it into an envelope, I felt a refreshing relief. It was as if a heavy load had been lifted from my shoulders. And I had to be on my way home. I started down the desolate road—the long road home. Fortunately, a car picked me up, and it was good to have someone to talk with. The driver was a salesman and very pleasant. “Where you going, boy ” he asked good-naturedly. There was a long silence before I said, “Home.” “Been away from home long ” I smiled, a little self-conscious, and said, “One year, one month and two days.” 注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Having heard my story, he expressed his support for my final decision and told me something surprising. _____ Finally I arrived home when. it was completely dark. _____ 文章大意 “我” 高中毕业后,因父母坚持让 “我” 上大学,加上觉得父亲过于严厉,农场家务繁重,与父亲发生争吵后离家出走。在外漂泊一年多,“我” 历经艰辛,做过许多工作,却因学历受限难以找到好工作。此时 “我” 意识到父母当初的想法是正确的,于是写信给父亲表达悔意,渴望回家。在回家路上,“我” 搭上一位推销员的车,他询问 “我” 的去向,“我” 告知他自己离家的时长。 故事山分析 开端:“我” 与父亲因上大学和农场劳作的矛盾争吵后离家出走。 发展:“我” 在外漂泊,经历各种工作,因学历不足碰壁,开始反思自己的行为。 高潮:“我” 写信给父亲表达想回家的愿望,踏上归程,这是故事的关键转折点,充满期待和紧张。 结局(待续写):通过司机的讲述以及 “我” 回家后的情景,展现家庭的接纳和 “我” 的成长,构成故事结局。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 父亲的狠话 “如果你离开,就别回来”:在续写中,会成为 “我” 回家的心理障碍,父亲的态度成为悬念,最终父亲可能会放下狠话,接纳 “我”,体现 ... ...
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