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读后续写 休斯顿湖的星空下,家的温暖在蔓延 讲义-安徽省铜陵市2024-2025学年高一上学期期末质量监测英语试题

日期:2025-02-07 科目:英语 类型:高中教案 查看:27次 大小:24002B 来源:二一课件通
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My Life Camping Experience Last year in October, my family and I took our first trip to the Lake Houston Wilderness Park and slept underneath the stars. As we walked through the beautiful park, the colors of the sun shined brightly on the pile of leaves. The gentle wind of the forest welcomed us with the sound of crackling (噼啪) of dried leaves. My family was altogether, which was the most important part of the trip for me. My brothers and sisters are adults with different lives, which makes it difficult for us to plan an activity, like this one, where we can be altogether at the same time and place. We had finished setting up the tent when it suddenly started raining. Luckily, we had positioned the tent on a high flat surface where water could not come into our tent. Even with the rain, I had never been happier. The quiet forest and big trees surrounded the tent. While we all enjoyed the sound of the rain dripping on our tent, mom prepared some snacks and drinks for us while we played games and chatted about our daily life stories. We made wet-weather camping fun. I noticed how unique it was camping under the sound of the rain; we were gathered around in the middle of nature and it was a nice feeling, though it was a little bit cool. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 As darkness fell, mom cooked a warm meal over the fire for the family. _____ We spent the rest of the evening exploring the rocky trails around our campsite. _____ 文章大意 去年 10 月,作者和家人首次前往休斯顿湖荒野公园露营。一家人难得齐聚,在美丽的公园中,阳光洒在落叶上,微风带来树叶的噼啪声。搭好帐篷后突然下雨,好在帐篷位置地势高且平坦,没被水淹。大家在雨声中玩游戏、聊天,妈妈准备了零食和饮料,雨中露营别有一番乐趣。 故事山分析 开端:作者一家前往休斯顿湖荒野公园露营,描述公园美丽的景色以及一家人齐聚的难得。 发展:搭好帐篷后下雨,一家人在帐篷里,伴着雨声玩游戏、聊天,享受雨中露营的独特体验。 高潮:随着夜晚降临,后续的活动将是故事的高潮部分,如用餐、探索周边等,会带来更多的乐趣和惊喜。 结局(待续写):通过晚餐后的探索以及对这次露营的整体感受,展现家庭的温暖和露营的美好,构成故事结局。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 一家人难得齐聚:为后续活动中家庭的温暖互动做铺垫,在续写中,晚餐和探索过程中家人之间的交流和陪伴会体现这一点,如一起分享美食、互相照顾等。 下雨:可能会影响后续活动,但也可能带来新的乐趣,在续写中,夜晚的活动可能会因为下雨后的地面状况、空气清新等因素产生独特的体验,比如探索潮湿的岩石小径,感受雨后森林的清新。 妈妈准备零食和饮料:暗示妈妈在露营中的照顾角色,在续写中,妈妈准备的晚餐会是家庭团聚的重要时刻,大家会一起享受美食,分享感受。 美丽的公园和自然环境:为后续的探索活动提供场景,在续写中,一家人会在周边的自然环境中探索,感受大自然的魅力。 作者对一家人齐聚的重视:在后续活动中会进一步体现家庭的温暖,在续写中,作者会在晚餐和探索过程中更加珍惜和家人在一起的时光。 续写要点(两段) 第一段:详细描写妈妈在火上做饭的场景,比如锅里的食材滋滋作响,香气四溢。一家人围坐在一起,分享美食, ... ...

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