
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When my sister, Dona, and I were little kids, my parents both joined the army. They stayed far away from our town and hardly returned home. My grandpa took on the big responsibility of taking care of us. Still, without our parents by our side, Dona and I sometimes felt lonely and sad, especially one winter. One morning in that winter when Dona and I were sitting in our bedroom, dull (沉闷的) and quiet, Grandpa said, “My dear, how about trying skating for fun ” Our faces immediately lit up and we answered together, “Great, we surely like it, Grandpa!” He smiled and quickly set about building us a skating rink (溜冰场) in our yard. The process of building a skating rink was not easy. First, Grandpa laid out long wooden boards around the yard. Next, he made the base of the rink flat. Grandpa then began spraying (喷) the water, lightly at first, until the first layer of ice was established. He would then put some water onto the ice each night. And thus, the ice became thicker and thicker. In the darkness of the night, from the kitchen window Dona and I watched Grandpa with great expectations. His back and shoulders rounded to protect him from the freezing wind. He stood alone, busying himself creating a perfect skating rink for us. The only light was from the moon and stars. One night, Grandpa suddenly pressed his waist and the look on his face showed he was painful. Quite concerned, Dona and I rushed out and asked, “Grandpa! What’s wrong ” “My waist is painful. Don’t worry! I’ll be fine just after a little rest,” he smiled. Dona and I offered to help create the rink. But he said it was too cold outside at night and that building the rink needs much experience and lots of skills. Then, we gave up the idea of offering him a hand, but demanded he build the rink a few days later. Seeing we were determined, he walked into the room with us and had warm tea. Before long, Dona and I were tired and went to bed. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式作答。 一、文章大意 作者和妹妹多娜小时候,父母参军远离家乡,由爷爷照顾。一个冬天,爷爷为了让姐妹俩开心,决定在院子里给她们建溜冰场。建溜冰场过程艰难,爷爷在寒冷的夜晚独自劳作,姐妹俩在厨房窗边满怀期待地看着。一天晚上,爷爷突然腰疼,姐妹俩想帮忙被拒,最后爷爷和她们一起回屋喝茶,姐妹俩因疲惫上床睡觉。 二、故事山分析 开端:父母参军,爷爷照顾作者和妹妹,冬天时姐妹俩感到沉闷,爷爷提议建溜冰场。 发展:爷爷开始建溜冰场,过程复杂,姐妹俩在夜晚看着爷爷忙碌。 高潮:爷爷腰疼,姐妹俩想帮忙但被拒绝,最后一起回屋喝茶,姐妹俩睡觉。 结局(预测):第二天姐妹俩看到建好的溜冰场,开心玩耍,感受到爷爷的爱。 尾声(预测):姐妹俩更加珍惜和爷爷在一起的时光,理解爷爷的付出。 三、伏笔及在续写中的回应 伏笔 1:父母不在身边,姐妹俩感到孤独沉闷。回应:爷爷建溜冰场就是为了让她们开心,后续可能会强调溜冰场给姐妹俩带来的欢乐,驱散孤独。 伏笔 2:建溜冰场过程艰难,爷爷独自在寒冷夜晚劳作。回应:体现爷爷的辛苦,为姐妹俩看到建好的溜冰场后的感动做铺垫。 伏笔 3: ... ...
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