2025届高考英语应用文写作训练1 书信类 告知+建议 讲义

应用文书信类(告知信+建议信) 训练讲评 一 书信类应用文格式、考情 书信类应用文首段一般包括开场寒暄，身份信息，背景事件，表达目的，衔接过渡五方面内容。 基于整体逻辑，中间段多采用虚（感受，想法等）实结合的内容构建模式 尾段一般包括重申，感受，互动等内容。 应用文高考趋势 1. 注重考查创新思维、分析问题解决问题的能力； 2. 内容要求更为具体； 3. 中国故事、国际视野、环保意识、体美劳等内容贯穿其中。 写作注意事项 1. 注意收信人身份（正式与非正式，语言的得体性）； 2. 注意格式特征; 3. 审题到位，写全要点 4. 句子的流畅性（长句较多，尾重原则；避免单一句式，句句开头都不同；） 二 告知信、活动介绍 (一) 练后重写 告知信 给笔友写信，非正式 假定你是李华，为丰富同学们的课外活动，上周你校举行了爱国歌咏比赛( patriotic song singing contest)。请给你的笔友Tom写一封信，分享其中的故事。内容包括: 1．比赛经过（整体+个人）；2．你的感悟（围绕爱国、歌曲、比赛）。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, _____ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 问题：比赛经过要具体；感悟要契合话题 范文 Dear Tom, Last week, our school organized a patriotic song singing contest to enrich our extracurricular activities, and it was truly an inspiring event! 开场寒暄，身份信息，背景事件√，表达目的，衔接过渡（简单评价或总结概括）（总分总结构） Students from different grades participated enthusiastically in it, singing patriotic songs that celebrated our country's glory and history. The atmosphere was electric as everyone sang with passion and pride. I performed a song that my grandfather used to sing, which made me feel connected to our heritage. 长句，符合尾重原则；句句开头都不同 比赛经过：参加人员，具体唱了哪首歌，+评价气氛、学生风貌，我做了什么+我的感受 I learn that expressing patriotism can take various forms, and music is one of the most beautiful ways to do so. It is a heartwarming experience that I will always treasure. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 或： Para1: I am writing to share with you a patriotic song singing contest held by our school last week, which is truly an inspiring event. 开场寒暄，身份信息，背景事件√，表达目的√，衔接过渡（简单评价）（总分总结构）√ 你的作品1 Dear Tom, How's everything going To enrich our after-class activities, our school held a patriotic song singing contest last week. I'd like to share some details with you.衔接过渡，好！ To begin with our headmaster left gave a lecture concerning the significance of loving country. Then, participaters participants were invited to give their performances and I engaged in it actively. In the end. I won the silver medal. 中间段要具体；因篇幅有限，校长讲话可以不写 After this contest，I was full of excitement and gratitude. Only our country blooms will we live a better life.I feel so fortunate to be born in China. Only+状语位于句首 才用倒装 I'm looking forward to your reply. 尾段有些突兀 Yours sincerely, Li Hua 帮你改进1-1（语言打磨） Last week, our school held a patriotic song singing contest to enrich our after-school activities. I’d like to share it with you. （删掉寒暄部分，语言更流畅） It started with a lect ... ...