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读后续写--与 “敌人” 相处的一天:敌人派的奇妙魔力 讲义素材-2025届云南省昭通市高中毕业生高三上学期诊断性检测英语试卷

日期:2025-02-09 科目:英语 类型:高中素材 查看:40次 大小:23173B 来源:二一课件通
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敌人,读后,昭通市,英语,检测,诊断
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落的开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My dad helped me build a tree house in our backyard. My sister was at camp for three whole weeks and I was on the best baseball team in town. It was all good until Jeremy Ross moved into the neighborhood. I did not like Jeremy Ross. He laughed at me when he struck me out in a baseball game. He had a party on his trampoline (蹦床) but I wasn’t even invited. Jeremy Ross was the only person on my enemy list. I never even had an enemy list until he moved into the neighborhood. I hung the list up in my tree house, where Jeremy Ross was not allowed to go. My dad told me that when he was my age he had enemies too. But he knew a good way to get rid of them. I asked him to tell me how. “I’ll show you how!” he said. He pulled a really old recipe book off the kitchen shelf. Inside, there was a worn-out scrap of paper with faded writing. “Enemy Pie,” he said, satisfied. I was wondering what exactly is in Enemy Pie. But Dad said the recipe was so secret. I begged him to tell me something or anything. “I’ll tell you this,” he said. “Enemy Pie is the fastest known way to get rid of enemies.” This got my mind working. What kinds of things — disgusting things — would I put into a pie for an enemy When Dad was preparing for the pic, I brought Dad some weeds, earthworms and rocks, but he didn’t think he needed those. I went out to play alone. I shot baskets until the ball got stuck on the roof. And all the while, I listened to the sounds of my dad chopping and stirring and blending the ingredients of Enemy Pie. I thought the Enemy Pie must be the most awful thing in the world. To my surprise, I smelled something really good. I asked Dad what was wrong. Enemy Pie shouldn’t smell this good. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But Dad told me: “In order for it to work, you need to spend a day with your enemy. Even worse, you have to be nice to him.” _____ We played games delightedly until my Dad called us for dinner. _____ 文章大意 文章讲述了 “我” 不喜欢新搬来的邻居 Jeremy Ross,因为他在棒球比赛中三振 “我” 还嘲笑 “我”,开派对也不邀请 “我”,“我” 把他列在敌人名单上。爸爸告诉 “我” 他有个去除敌人的好办法 ——— 制作敌人派,“我” 好奇敌人派里有什么,还为爸爸找来杂草、蚯蚓和石头,但爸爸没用。制作过程中,“我” 以为敌人派会很难闻,结果却闻到很香的味道。 故事山分析 开头:Jeremy Ross 搬来,成为 “我” 的敌人,“我” 把他列在敌人名单上。 发展:爸爸说有去除敌人的办法,要制作敌人派,“我” 好奇派的成分,为爸爸找材料,制作时闻到香味。 高潮:爸爸告知吃敌人派的条件,“我” 要和敌人相处一天且对他友好。 结局:和 Jeremy Ross 相处后关系改变,吃敌人派化解了矛盾。 尾声:明白友好能消除敌意,收获友谊。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 爸爸说有去除敌人的办法:在续写中通过制作和吃敌人派体现这个办法的作用。 “我” 对敌人派成分的好奇:续写中会揭晓敌人派其实是普通美味的派,回应好奇。 制作时闻到香味:暗示敌人派并非想象中糟糕,为后面与 Jeremy Ross 友好相处吃派做铺垫 ... ...

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