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课件网) Unit 1 People around us Writing 写作优质课 （沪教版2024）七年级 下 Learning objectives 1 Lead in Pre-writing 3 While-writing Post-writing 5 Summary Assessment 7 Homework 2 4 6 8 By the end of the lesson, I will be able to... 1 2 3 4 Understand the purpose, style, and requirements of writing. Describe the person you love and complete an English short article based on the sample. Improve the structure, content, and language of the initial draft through self-evaluation and peer evaluation. Learn to discover the shining points of people around you. Learning objectives 01 How to describe a person What does she look like What is her hobby What does she do What do you think of her tall; with long hair love English；travelling teach English; be strict about kind; patient Lead in 01 Lead in 01 Wang Yao wanted to write about someone in her life. Who am I going to write about (e.g. a family member / a teacher / someone in the community) What is he / she like What does he / she do What does he / she often say What do I think of him / her What I like about him / her. Pre-writing 02 She first organized her ideas by asking herself some questions about the topic. My nice neighbour Yao Yuan Yao Yuan is my neighbour and schoolmate. He is kind and hard-working. Yao Yuan is very active in our community. At the weekend, he often helps out at a local retirement home. He teaches retired people to use computers and smartphones. He says, “I’m always happy to help!” Yao Yuan also uses his time wisely. Every day, he gets up at six and exercises for half an hour before breakfast. Then he listens to English programmes on the way to school. He won the school English speaking competition last year. Yao Yuan is an amazing person, and I wish I could be like him! Read Wang Yao’s article and match the questions to the paragraphs that answer them. Some paragraphs may contain the answers to more than one question. Paragraph 1 _____ Paragraph 2 _____ Paragraph 3 _____ Paragraph 4 _____ a, b c, d c e Pre-writing 02 1. Who does Wang Yao write about 2. What is he like 3. What does he do 4. What does he often say 5. What does Wang Yao think of him He is kind and hard-working. He is very active in the community and he uses his time wisely. “I’m always happy to help!” She thinks that he is an amazing person / her role model, and she wishes she could be like him! Read Wang Yao’s article again and answer the questions. Pre-writing 02 Her neighbour Yao Yuan. a family member a good friend a teacher or a neighbour Step 1: Who are you going to write about Here are some ideas. He / She can be someone you care for, respect or love. A person I like While-writing 03 Step 2: Think about what to write about in your article. You may use the questions as a guide. my mother strong, caring help patients, help with my homework, take care of family, volunteer in the community, never stop learning When you love what you do, you’ll be a ... ...
