(
课件网) Writing I can improve my writing skills. Guess what we are going to write about The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve (年夜饭) （20分） 满分档： 准确理解写作任务，文本长度符合要求、书写规范， 涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密， 词汇丰富，没有语法错误。 初中毕业生学业考试作文题评分标准 points structure language Get the key points. checklist Prewriting 年夜饭是中国文化最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕（New Year cake）、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。 请以 “ The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve” 为题，写一篇约110词的短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解丰富多彩的文化习俗。 注意：1. 文中不可出现人名； 2. 标题已经给出，不计入总词数。 Circle the key points. importance meanings & wishes cultures & customs Spring Festival dishes points Make an outline（提纲） Title : The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve Beginning: Paragraph 1 _____ Body: Paragraph 2 _____ _____ Ending: Paragraph 3 _____ b. importance of the dinner a. meanings & wishes c. Spring Festival dishes in your hometown points d. cultures & customs a clear structure Make an outline Title: The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve Beginning: Paragraph 1 Body: Paragraph 2 Spring Festival dishes in your hometown meanings or wishes Ending : Paragraph 3 What traditional dishes do you have on Spring Festival Eve What good meanings or best wishes do these dishes have How do you like the dinner traditional dishes good meanings or best wishes to become better every year to have more good luck every year to have more than what we need to have enough to spend every year to get together with family to enjoy a family reunion New Year cake is a traditional dish. It means to have more good luck and become better every year. b. New Year cake is a traditional dish in China and it means having more good luck as well as becoming better every year. New Year cake is a traditional dish which/that means to have more luck and become better every year. d. New Year cake, one of the traditional dishes in China, means we can become better every year. We Chinese believe we can have more good luck every year so that we often have New Year cake as a traditional dish on Spring Festival Eve. … Compare these sentences Which one/ones do you like How do you improve these sentences Fish is a traditional dish. It means we can have more than what we need every year. Tangyuan is also a traditional dish. It means that the family will always be together. Tips：use correct and good sentence patterns (使用正确优美的句式) 用which/that引导的定语从句； 用and, as well as, not only…but also… 等连接词连接的句子； 用有插入语的句子； 用改变主语的句子； 用你自己喜欢的好句子…… _____, New Year cake is the first dish which means having good luck as well as becoming better next year. _____, Tangyuan, one of the traditional dishes in China, means that the family will always be together. _____, people like to eat fish so that they can have enoug ... ...
