
读后续写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a bright Saturday morning. Lucy awoke with the sun, her heart pounding with anticipation. Today was the day her father, Jack, was taking her on a hiking adventure in the mountain. Lucy had always been captivated by the great outdoors, and hiking with her father was one of her favorite pastimes. She dressed quickly in her favorite hiking gear, picked up the backpack she had packed the night before, and stepped out to wait on the porch. The sight of her father’s old blue truck coming up the driveway filled her with joy and excitement. Father Jack stepped out, his eyes twinkling as he greeted Lucy. “All set for an adventure ” he asked. “Absolutely!” Lucy replied, her face beaming with joy. Just then, he added, “But be warned, there’s been talk of a bear in the area we’re hiking today.” Lucy’s eyes widened in surprise, but then Jack’s laughter broke the tension. “You should have seen your face,” he chuckled, and Lucy joined in, knowing her father’s playful nature. “Let’s grab some breakfast first,” Jack suggested, and they headed to a cafe known for its pancakes. After a hearty breakfast, they arrived at the trailhead (小道的起点) of Blue Ridge Mountain. “Lace up those boots tight,” Jack instructed, and Lucy followed suit, her hands skillfully securing each knot. They set off, the crisp mountain air fueling their spirits. As they walked along the winding path, Lucy’s excitement got the better of her, and she hurried ahead, eager to reach the summit. Her father called out words of caution, but Lucy was caught up in the thrill of the climb. Suddenly, her foot slipped on a loose rock, and she tumbled down a small incline (斜坡). Bruised but determined, she dusted herself off and continued, more carefully. The father and daughter reached a scenic viewpoint, and Jack pointed out various landmarks, sharing stories of the area’s history. They took a moment to rest, drinking water and enjoying the panoramic view. Half an hour later, they started to walk down the mountain. As they were going downhill, Lucy heard something unusual. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 She stopped, heart pounding, and looked down to see a snake moving away from her path. _____ Arriving at the trailhead again, Lucy felt both relieved and proud. _____ Lucy徒步遇蛇的故事续写 续写要点 第一段续写要点:细致描绘 Lucy 看到蛇时的惊恐表现,如脸色瞬间变白、身体微微颤抖、呼吸急促等,通过这些细节强化紧张氛围。详细叙述父亲 Jack 的反应,他迅速而镇定地赶到 Lucy 身边,眼神专注地观察蛇的动向,同时用温和且坚定的语气安慰 Lucy,展现父亲的沉稳。补充蛇的行为细节,如它的爬行姿态、移动方向等,以及周围环境的描写,如茂密的草丛、寂静的山林,进一步烘托气氛。描述 Lucy 在父亲引导下的行动,她听从父亲的指示,小心翼翼地后退,努力控制自己的恐惧,为后续继续下山做铺垫。 第二段续写要点:具体描述 Lucy 到达起点时的复杂情感,她的脸上既有放松的神情,又洋溢着自豪的光彩,通过表情和 ... ...
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