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读后续写--帐篷外的北极熊:暗夜惊魂与希望之光 讲义素材-山东省2024-2025学年高三上学期新高考联合质量测评9月联考英语试题

日期:2025-09-21 科目:英语 类型:高中素材 查看:33次 大小:23956B 来源:二一课件通
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Our group had stopped to remove our boots before a small stream crossing after a morning of exploring the seaside foothills of Canada’s Torngat Mountains National Park in Newfoundland and Labrador. I looked up and there it was, about 150 yards away, staring at us: a polar bear. Our guides had warned us about the dangers of polar bear country, but I thought I’d be lucky if I saw one in the wild. I’ve seen plenty of black bears, but never anything this big. This guy was a bruiser. We gathered together and began shouting at the bear, but when that didn’t frighten it, our guide, Rich, shot a flare(照明弹). The bear escaped to a ledge, and we crossed the stream into camp. It stayed there as we cooked and ate our dinner. When bedtime rolled around, I glanced up. The bear hadn’t moved. I started cycling through all the worst- case scenarios that could hap- pen, but I tried to remember everything we’d prepared to keep us safe. Our guides had put up an electric fence meant to frighten bears away from our tents. It ran off a couple of batteries like you would put in a flashlight. The outfitter said if we touched it, the shock would blow us out of our hiking boots. I crawled into my tent and tried to get some rest. I lay awake, trembling with anxiety, but eventually, sleep got the best of me. A few hours later, I stepped out of my tent to go to the bathroom, and the bear was gone. I felt relieved. The sounds of rain and snow made me back to sleep. Around 2:30 a. m., movement outside woke me. I had been sleeping on my back and looked up to see a shadow towering over my tent. I recognized the shape immediately; two big bear legs, Obviously, the electric fence didn’t work. I screamed, and tried to take flight. _____ Then, I heard a swoosh— Rich had about off a flare. _____ 文章大意 作者一行人在加拿大的托尔加特山国家公园海滨山麓探险,过河前看到一只北极熊。他们呼喊、发射照明弹将其驱离,之后在营地做饭、休息,营地设有电围栏防熊。作者入睡后,半夜起来上厕所发现熊不见了,可凌晨 2 点半,一只北极熊出现在作者帐篷外,电围栏失效。 故事山分析 开端:作者一行在探险途中遇到北极熊,采取措施驱赶。 发展:在营地做饭、休息,依靠电围栏防范北极熊,作者入睡。 高潮:半夜北极熊出现在作者帐篷外,电围栏失效,作者尖叫,此时故事发展到最紧张的时刻,后续如何应对是高潮部分。 结局:作者等人成功摆脱北极熊,对这次经历有深刻感悟,重新审视探险的意义与自身的勇气。 五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应 伏笔:导游警告过北极熊的危险,作者看到熊后感到幸运又紧张。回应:为后续熊的出现以及作者的恐惧反应做铺垫,当熊出现在帐篷外,作者的恐惧达到顶点。 伏笔:用电围栏防范北极熊,称其能将人电出靴子。回应:电围栏失效,北极熊靠近帐篷,形成强烈反差,增加故事紧张感,也推动情节发展,促使作者等人采取其他应对措施。 伏笔:作者看到熊后开始设想最坏的情况。回应:熊出现在帐篷外时,作者的设想似乎要成真,进一步渲染紧张氛围,同时凸显作者的恐惧心理。 伏笔:作者入睡后半夜起来上厕所看到熊消失。回应:熊的再次出现出乎作者意料,与之前消失形成对比,使故事更具戏 ... ...

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