Unit13 We’re trying to save the earth! Writing Name I. Analyze the topic Writing Topic Mianyang is a clean city in China,but there are also some environmental problems these days.Everyone is responsible for protecting environment.Please write an e-mail to the city mayor about the problems and your suggestions and send it to dsjzx-cx@my.. In your e-mail,you can describe the following questions: What are the problems What caused these problems What are your possible suggestions 写作要求：书写规范，100词左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Person： Tense： Text： Details Reader： III. Make an outline Structure： _____ _____ _____ _____ IV. Finish the first draft Dear City Mayor, V. Finish the second draft Dear City Mayor,Marking ladders Unit13 We’re trying to save the earth! For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point) Para : I have led the topic (2 point) Para_____: I have written problems,causes,solutions (9points) Para.____:I have showed my expectations (2 point) My writing is tidy and clear. (2point) Grammar and language My expressions are right. (3 points) There are spelling mistakes. (1 point) I have used some good sentences. (2 point) I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences.. (2 point) I have checked my word count is around . (1 point) Total Score What can I do to improve my writing next time (
课件网) Unit13 We’re trying to save the earth! Writing Writing Topic Mianyang is a clean city in China,but there are also some environmental problems these days.Everyone is responsible for protecting environment.Please write an e-mail to the city mayor about the problems and your suggestions and send it to dsjzx-cx@my.. In your e-mail,you can describle the following questions: What are the problems What caused these problems What are your possible suggestions 要求： 1.书写规范，100词左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Pre-writing Person The third person Tense The simple present Text An e-mail Reader the mayer of Mianyang Details 1. Describle all the questions 2.80-100 words Pre-writing Beginning movie/reasons/contents/feelings Body Ending Structure lead to the topic Pre-writing problems/causes/solutions show expectations Pre-writing I’m glad /happy...to write a letter to you. greetings I am a middle school student named/called... introduction I want to/I’d like to /I’m willing to tell you something about the environmental problems in our city. Lead the topic Beginning Pre-writing Body air/water/noise/land/waste...pollution eg.The air is badly polluted./We can’t see blue sky anymore. 1.factories that brun coal pollute... 2.there are more cars/... 3.factories put waste water ... 4.people throw litter into river. 5.farmers use farming chemicals... 6.people buy useless things. 7.people throw away things like wooden chops ... ...
