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课件网) 读后续写微技能指导 --心理描写+环境描写 表达的精准性和丰富性 读后续写微技能指导 —人物内心世界（1） How do they feel happy happy glad joyful delighted excited... angry annoyed irritated mad... sad disappointed depressed frustrated upset... surprised amazed astonished shocked ... Tip1：Use adjectives to describe the feelings. emotions excitement sadness fear anger Tip2： Use nouns to describe the feelings. 1、当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。 When she knew the result of the test, 2、听到这个消息，他非常生气 。 Hearing the news, she felt extremely_____. her eyes twinkled _____. he got very _____. he was filled _____. excited/joyful with excitement/joy angry with anger He covered his mouth to hide his yawn. Our mouths dropped open in surprise. She folded her arms and stared at him. She jumped to her feet at the news. She picked her way carefully along the stream. He paced back and forth. She screamed that there was a snake. tired surprised angry excited cautious upset/uneasy frightened feelings actions Tip3：Use actions to describe the feelings. scratch her head 她挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。 She scratched her head, not understanding a word. hang/drop/lower one’s head 他羞愧地低下了头。 He hung/dropped/lowered his head in shame. puzzled confused ashamed sad…… Can we describe feelings more vividly Action+非谓语 Action+介词短语 一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。 概括描述：Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad. Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly. 关于悲伤的描写 1）一听到那个坏消息，她很心痛，眼泪直流。 2）一听到那个坏消息，她被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。 Exercise1: Exercise2: 关于高兴的描写 当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。 概括描述：When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy. When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. 2)当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby满脸堆满笑容，笑容照亮房间。 When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. 1)当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。 Exercise3: 关于害怕的描写 当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。 概括描述：At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt very scared. 1）当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。 At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 2）当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我吓呆了，不敢动弹。 At the sight of the fierce wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 她感到非常羞愧。 概括描述：She felt ashamed. 她感到如此羞愧以至于脸上滚烫/血液涌上脸颊。 关于羞愧的描写 Exercise 4: She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning. So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. 实战演练（2020年7月，浙江高考） Paragraph1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Paragraph2：At that ... ...
