Marking ladders Unit14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7. For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point) Para : I have introduced who (2 point) Para_____: I have written why/what/how (9points) Para.____:I have showed my changes and feelings (2 point) My writing is tidy and clear. (2point) Grammar and language My expressions are right. (3 points) There are spelling mistakes. (1 point) I have used some good sentences. (2 point) I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences.. (2 point) I have checked my word count is around . (1 point) Total Score What can I do to improve my writing next time Unit14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7. Writing Name I. Analyze the topic Writing Topic Time flies!The junior high school life is coming to an end.Look back at the past three years,there must be many people that you will never forget.Please write a passage about a person from junior high school that you will never forget. Following questions may help you. Who is the person Why is she/he the person that you will never forget What happened to you How did he/she help you With her/his help,how have you changed How do you feel about him/her 写作要求:书写规范,100词左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Person: Tense: Text: Details Reader: III. Make an outline Structure: _____ _____ _____ _____ IV. Finish the first draft The most unforgettable_____(teacher/friend/...) V. Finish the second draft The most unforgettable_____(teacher/friend/...)(
课件网) Writing Unit14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7. Review Their Unforgettable Persons We had a great P.E.teacher. He _____ (给我们清晰的指令)so that we'd be safe when playing sports. I used to be scared of(过去害恺) Mr. Brown in Grade8. He was so strict. l always did my homework carefully to _____.(达到他的标准). After junior high school, l will miss Ms. Griffin the most.She _____(在英语课堂上鼓励我).Because of her,l _____. (付出了更多的努力,考试分数翻倍了。 Lisa Peter Judy gave us clear instructions meet his standards encouraged me in English class put in more effort and my exams scores doubled Review Their Unforgettable Persons The one person from my junior high school days that l will never forget is Ms.Lee.She _____me(对我总是很耐心)in math class. She helped me to _____ no matter _____.(不管题目有多难她都帮我找到答案。) Mr. Brown is one of teachers who I'll never forget. He always _____(花时间给我解释清楚)whenever I couldn't understand anything. Clara was always patient with work out the answers myself how difficult they were took the time to explain things to me clearly Who is your most unforgettable person Pre-writing Writing Topic Time flies!The junior high school life is coming to an end.Look back at the past three years,there must be many people that you will never f ... ...