Unit 8 Once Upon a Time. 话题写作指导（含解析）人教版（2024）七年级下册

Unit 8 Once Upon a Time. （话题写作指导） 解析版 【话题分析】 本单元围绕 “讲故事” 展开，写作重点在于熟练运用一般过去时叙述故事。写作时可通过设置有趣的角色、情节来吸引读者，同时要准确使用动词过去式。 【常用句型】 Long long ago, there was... One day, sth. happened to... At last/Finally, ... 【写作实例】 请根据以下提示，讲述一个关于 “小马过河” 的故事，词数 70 词左右。 提示词语： pony（小马）, river（河）, calf（小牛）, squirrel（松鼠）, deep（深的）, shallow（浅的） 【思路点拨】 开篇介绍小马要做的事（帮妈妈做事，需要过河）。 描述小马在河边遇到的情况（分别询问小牛和松鼠，得到不同答案）。 说明小马的决定及结果（尝试过河，发现河水不深不浅，成功过河）。 【经典句】 Long long ago, there was a king who loved new clothes.（可类比改写使用） The king walked through the city in his new clothes. （体现过去动作） 【经典范文】 Long long ago, there was a little pony. One day, his mother asked him to carry a bag of wheat to a mill. On the way, he came to a river. A calf said the river was very shallow, but a squirrel said it was very deep. The little pony was very confused. Finally, he decided to try. He found that the river was neither too deep nor too shallow. He crossed the river successfully and finished his task. 【亮点点评】 用 Long long ago 开头，符合讲故事的情境。 通过描述不同角色的观点，增加故事的趣味性。 使用 neither...nor... 准确表达小马过河时对河水深度的感受。 【同步检测】 以 “A Clever Monkey” 为题，根据以下提示写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文。 提示： 猴子在树上玩耍，看到树下有个猎人拿着枪； 猎人准备射击树上的小鸟； 猴子想办法救了小鸟（如扔果子吸引猎人注意等）； 小鸟和猴子成为好朋友。 A Clever Monkey Once upon a time, a monkey was playing in a tree. Suddenly, he saw a hunter with a gun under the tree. The hunter was about to shoot the birds in the tree. The monkey worried about the birds. Quickly, he had an idea. He picked up some fruits and threw them far away from the tree. The hunter heard the sound and ran to check. Taking this chance, the birds flew away safely. After that, the birds and the monkey became good friends. They played together in the forest every day. 假设你要在英语课上分享一个神话故事，请以 “A Chinese Myth Story” 为题，介绍 “精卫填海” 的故事，不少于 80 词。 提示词汇： Jingwei（精卫）, the Eastern Sea（东海）, daughter（女儿）, drowned（溺水）, pebble（石子） A Chinese Myth Story Long long ago, there was a little girl. She was the daughter of the Emperor of Yan. One day, she went boating on the Eastern Sea. Unluckily, a strong wind came and the boat sank. She drowned in the sea. But her spirit turned into a bird named Jingwei. Since then, Jingwei was determined to fill the Eastern Sea. Every day, she flew to the mountains, picked up pebbles, and threw them into the sea. Although it was a difficult task, Jingwei never gave up. This story shows us the power of perseverance. 续写短文 Once upon a time, there was a poor boy called Tom. He lived with his mother. One day, while he was walking in the forest, he found a strange key. It was ... ...