
Unit 2 No Rules,No Order! writing- rules 1. 写作要点解析 1.1 确定主题 1.1.1 主题范围 本单元围绕“规则与秩序(No Rules, No Order)”展开,写作主题通常聚焦于家规和校规,需结合具体规则说明其重要性。例如: 我要遵守很多家规和校规。 I have to follow too many rules at home and at school. 我生活中有很多规则去遵守。 There are too many rules to follow in my life. 让我来向你介绍… Let me introduce … to you. Let me tell you about them I’d love to tell you about ... ①- 介绍家规(如整理房间、按时完成作业); 每天早上/起床后整理床铺。 Every morning/ make my bed after I get up. 放学后/先完成作业。 finish my homework first after school. ②- 列举校规(如小声交谈、制造噪音、手机); 在图书馆小声交谈/ 制造噪音。 talk quietly in the library./ make noise 把手机带到教室/关机/保存在柜子里。 bring mobile phones to the calss. turn them off and keep them in the lockers. ③- 分析遵守规则的意义(培养责任感、维护秩序)。 规则可以帮助你成为一个更好得人。 You can show respect for the class and the teacher. 规则可以帮助让世界更好。 You need to focus on learning. 1.1.2 主题选择建议 根据个人经历选择主题: - 若对校规印象深刻,可重点描述2-3条校规并说明原因; - 若家庭规则严格,可结合家规与个人成长的关系; - 呼吁遵守规则时,可引用谚语(如“No rules, no order”)增强说服力。 1.1.3 主题明确的重要性 明确主题能避免内容分散,例如: 不明确:I have many rules. Some are at school, some are at home. 明确:Following school rules helps us focus on learning, while home rules teach me responsibility. 1.2 文章结构 1.2.1 总分总结构介绍 建议采用三段式结构: 1. 开头:引用谚语引出主题,如“As a saying goes, ‘No rules, no order’.” 2. 正文:分段描述校规和家规,每段用连接词串联(如First, What’s more, Also)。 3. 结尾:总结规则的重要性,如“Rules make our life orderly and meaningful.” 1.2.2 各部分写作要点 开头:简洁有力,直接点题。 正确示例:I have to follow many rules at home and school. Let me tell you why they are important. 错误示例:Rules are everywhere. Some are good, some are bad. 正文: 校规:用情态动词(must/mustn’t)说明规则,结合原因(because/so)。 示例:We must wear school uniforms because it builds school spirit. 家规:用对比连接词(but/instead)表达限制与自由。 示例:I can’t watch TV on weekdays, but I can relax on weekends. 结尾:升华主题,强调规则的价值。 正确示例:All in all, rules help us become better people. 错误示例:That’s all my rules. 1.2.3 结构示例 开头:As a saying goes, “No rules, no order”. I have many rules to follow at home and school. 正文:First, at school, we must arrive on time. If we are late, the teacher will be unhappy. What’s more, we mustn’t eat snacks in class. Instead, we should keep the classroom clean. At home, I have to finish homework before playing games. 结尾:In a word, rules teach us responsibility and make life better. 1.3 语言表达 1.3.1 词汇运用 规则相关词汇:rules, order, respect, responsibility, discipline. 校规高频词:school uniforms, arrive on time, raise hands, keep quiet. 家规高频词:do homework, make the bed, practice the piano, do ... ...
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