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课件网) 跨越时空的等待：狗狗Spider的寻家之旅题目分析读后续写题目再现语言赏析范文呈现Part 1题目呈现续写原文My family moved from Toowoomba, Canada to London in 1950. My mother was in great pain from the 1950s epidemic of polio(小儿麻痹症). She wished to visit specialists in London. The day before we boarded the ship, Father bade a tender farewell to his five-year-old "friend"at the dock(码头), an Australian cattle dog, Spider, who was loved by us all. Father's friend Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas.Six weeks later, a letter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed. I will always remember my father's face crumbling and his eyes glistening as he read the letter. We tried to comfort him, knowing in our hearts how useless this was. Sandy had advertised constantly on ABC radio and other local newspapers. Despite some "sightings"in the dock at first, the dog was never found later. It seemed Spider decided to search for us elsewhere.续写原文We sailed back two years later and re-established our home in Toowoomba. My father immediately began his own searching for Spider. Several months passed but there was still no news concerning Spider. The dog was gone, possibly shot or dead from starvation or exhaustion.One cold morning eight months after our return, my father had a call from an old lady who said she was putting food out for a very old dog. In the night the food disappeared. This had been going on for a few weeks. That was enough for my father to interrupt my homework and we set off immediately. When we arrived at the old lady's house, she invited us into an old bush. Sadly, she then told us that the "dingo dog" hadn’t been around for a few days. My father had a strange look in his eye. He put two fingers to his lips and did his special whistle（口哨）for Spider.Given Sentence: Suddenly there was a bark in the bush.Part 2题目分析续写原文分析全家因母亲治病搬去英国，Spider被托付给朋友。情节开篇交代了迁徙的背景和原因，为后续故事发展埋下伏笔。Beginning:家庭迁徙与离别Spider跑丢，多方寻找无果。这一情节增添了故事的悬念，引发读者对狗的安危和能否找回的担忧。Development:Spider失踪与寻找全家回国后父亲继续寻找，接到老妇人电话前往却得知狗已几天未出现，父亲吹口哨。情节再次出现转机，为续写提供了广阔的空间。Climax:家庭回归与再寻找续写思路分析①父亲在听到灌木丛中声音时的紧张与期待②看到Spider出现时的激动与喜悦③狗是否还活着，如何找到④在灌木丛中寻找的过程⑤对狗身体状况的担忧①描写狗在野外的艰难生存，如觅食、躲避危险，以及它对家的思念，不断寻找主人②想象狗的生存状态和与家人重逢的方式，描写狗听到口哨声后的反应，以及家人看到狗时的惊喜和心疼，让故事更加生动感人。续写要与原文结构呼应，如开头和结尾的情感呼应。①开头描写父亲的担忧和期待，结尾描写家庭的团聚和幸福②情感升华，如重逢后的喜悦和对家庭的珍视③描写家人对Spider的精心照顾，体现家庭的温暖和对宠物的关爱，升华故事的主题。情感与悬念的延续合理想象与情节发展结构与情感升华010203续写思路 ... ...
