2025年高考英语答题技巧与答题模板（全国通用）专题14读后续写八步成文法（学生版+教师版）

专题14 读后续写八步成文法 【三大步】 三步核心：审题 构思 润色 审题：审人称时态情节结构衔接 构思：组织材料。围绕全文思想展开情节构思，但要与所给各段落开头语衔接合理。 润色：本着语言形象生动的原则，把构思句子进行修改，使得行文流畅，逻辑合理，语法正确，可以使用无灵主语句。避免句式单一，可以灵活使用高级句型，非谓语短语，独立主格结构，从句。最后，务必整洁地写在答题卡上。 【八小步】 情绪：消极情绪 2. 细节：进一步解释描写 3. 转折：个人的努力或借助外界 4. 转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰 5. 失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题 6. 新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法） 7. 结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折 8. 总结：点题，呼应前文 读后续写，大部分都是围绕conflict，solution来运转的。大部分文章都是这个模式： 第1步:消极情绪 a wave of...=a feeling/sense of+情绪名词 flooded over阵...的情绪涌上心头。 sb=swept over sb 情绪名词 fear,terror, fright, panic 害怕happiness,joy,delight 开心gratitude,appreciation 感激sadness,sorrow 悲伤anger, rage,fury愤怒anxiety,stress,nervousness 紧张,不安surprise,amazement,shock震惊guilt,regret 后悔,内疚 Sb felt sb was floating in an ocean of+ 情绪名词某人感到自己漂浮在...的海洋中. 第2步： 细节(动作刻画)：进一步解释描写 描写与head有关动作nodded one's head点头shook one's head摇头 描写“看”这一动作词: saw看见 spotted 发现 recognized认出observed sb doing/do sth 注意到某人正在做/做过 短语:stared at盯着看 glared at 怒视 glanced at瞥一眼带“eye”的表达:looked sb in the eye 直视某人的眼睛 带“sight”的表达看得见: sb/sth be in my sight /came into my sight/sb. caught sight of sth看不见:sb/sth be out of sight/ faded away 哭/笑: burst into tears/laughter(大哭/大笑)couldn't help crying/laughing(情不自禁地哭/笑)tears welled up in the eyes 眼泪涌出cheeks/face泪水落下 描写“说” 温和地说，补充道，坚持说，抽泣着说，耳边轻声说said gently/added /insisted / sobbed/whispered 与arm (手臂)有关的动作描写waved his arms.挥手grabbed her left arm抓住她的左臂put his arms around her 他搂着她描写与hand有关的动作took out取出/拿出held one's hand抓住某人的手shook hands with与...握手hand in hand 手拉手raised one's hand 举手held out one's hand伸出手 took one's hand牵某人的手Her hands shook/trembled/shivered她的手颤抖着 屏住呼吸:Sb held one's breath. 深呼吸:Sb took a deep breath. 心里想: An inner voice told sb that 内心的声音告诉某人... 细节描写:笑 看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。 At the sight of the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy. Seeing the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy. (3)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, Jane's eyes/face lit up with delight. (4)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, a bright smile lit up Jane's face/eyes. 细节描写:哭 A lump came to his throat. 他哽咽欲哭。 Her eyes were red from crying.她的双眼哭得通红。 Her eyes brimmed with tears. 她的眼里满含泪水。 Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。 细节描写:害怕 我感到很害怕。 I felt very frightened/scared/panicked. I was in (a) panic/was full of fear. I stood rooted to the spot, brimming with fear/filled ... ...